Very nice. Don't have anything else to say. Just incredible.

No.. AH! Poor Lucivar.

...I liked the last line alot... made me hate the bitches even more.

Good Job
Liv

xx

Intriguing. Dark. I think you've pretty well captured Lucivar's entire childhood in a page. I applaud you.

Oh, dear. Poor Lucivar. This was extremely intense and very well written.