 maraudersbanana 2009-01-19 . chapter 3Is it Kister (or whatever his name is)? |
 Ann Jinn 2008-08-08 . chapter 3What a surprise. Interesting choice of words, but seem to fit Anakin, he dismissed the Force.
Good battle scene and wizard moves. |
 Jessele Bryant 2008-08-04 . chapter 3Is it... Kitster? Or how ever his name is spelled.
I'm looking forward to more. Keep on writing! |
 Richard Cypher 2008-08-03 . chapter 3who is it it? I have to know - keep writing |
 Selenia Rosedark 2008-08-03 . chapter 3Yes! When I saw that you'd updated this I literally screamed. Now my family is convinced I'm crazy. @_@ Ah well.
I'm not gonna' chide you for taking so long to update, because I'm taking MUCH longer with mine. I think that last time I updated was... last year? Yikes. O_O
Anywho, interesting (BTW, I use that word too much ^_^) chapter. Did you make up the Cortosis Blade, or am I extremely arrogant in the Way of the Jedi? (:wacko: --> "ME") |
 Anakin T Skywalker 2008-01-15 . chapter 2Well, it's about time you updated this! I've been waiting. I hope the next one coes sooner - I am not very patient. |
 Ann Jinn 2008-01-15 . chapter 2Good luck to both. Like Obi Wan's understanding of the war, each side calling in more.
Now the man in black - - not Zorro for sure! |
 Selenia Rosedark 2008-01-15 . chapter 2Where's Annie?! You did that on purpose didn't you? Arrggh!! Cliffhangers shall one day be my downfall...
But you got that chapter up REALLY quickly. Props. ^_^
But write the other one now, 'kay? ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |
 Selenia Rosedark 2008-01-11 . chapter 1Wow...
You know, I felt that since you reviewed one of my stories, I should review on of yours, and I REALLY enjoyed this!! It was all completely in character! Not a single slip! I'll be waiting for more! *uses jedi powers to make you write fast* |
 Anakin T Skywalker 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Sounds interesting- keep going! Good writing style, too. Either you are a great speller and gramarian or you've got a great proofreader! |
 LostInHyrule 2007-12-30 . chapter 1Awesome. You can barely tell it is the same story as the last one, it is such an upgrade. There is still one paragraph where two people talk and you need to paragraph it, but it's still awesome.
On that note, I do, however, feel as if you rush into things. Perhaps a little more commentary on Anakin's exploration, or more history before action intervenes.
Still, a huge upgrade from the original story, and an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to this story's future development. |