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Reviews for: Star Wars: Revelation on Zereana
maraudersbanana
2009-01-19 . chapter 3
Is it Kister (or whatever his name is)?
Ann Jinn
2008-08-08 . chapter 3
What a surprise. Interesting choice of words, but seem to fit Anakin, he dismissed the Force.

Good battle scene and wizard moves.
Jessele Bryant
2008-08-04 . chapter 3
Is it... Kitster? Or how ever his name is spelled.

I'm looking forward to more. Keep on writing!
Richard Cypher
2008-08-03 . chapter 3
who is it it? I have to know - keep writing
Selenia Rosedark
2008-08-03 . chapter 3
Yes! When I saw that you'd updated this I literally screamed. Now my family is convinced I'm crazy. @_@ Ah well.

I'm not gonna' chide you for taking so long to update, because I'm taking MUCH longer with mine. I think that last time I updated was... last year? Yikes. O_O

Anywho, interesting (BTW, I use that word too much ^_^) chapter. Did you make up the Cortosis Blade, or am I extremely arrogant in the Way of the Jedi? (:wacko: --> "ME")
Anakin T Skywalker
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
Well, it's about time you updated this! I've been waiting. I hope the next one coes sooner - I am not very patient.
Ann Jinn
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
Good luck to both. Like Obi Wan's understanding of the war, each side calling in more.

Now the man in black - - not Zorro for sure!
Selenia Rosedark
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
Where's Annie?! You did that on purpose didn't you? Arrggh!! Cliffhangers shall one day be my downfall...

But you got that chapter up REALLY quickly. Props. ^_^

But write the other one now, 'kay? ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Selenia Rosedark
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
Wow...

You know, I felt that since you reviewed one of my stories, I should review on of yours, and I REALLY enjoyed this!! It was all completely in character! Not a single slip! I'll be waiting for more! *uses jedi powers to make you write fast*
Anakin T Skywalker
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
Sounds interesting- keep going! Good writing style, too. Either you are a great speller and gramarian or you've got a great proofreader!
LostInHyrule
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
Awesome. You can barely tell it is the same story as the last one, it is such an upgrade. There is still one paragraph where two people talk and you need to paragraph it, but it's still awesome.

On that note, I do, however, feel as if you rush into things. Perhaps a little more commentary on Anakin's exploration, or more history before action intervenes.

Still, a huge upgrade from the original story, and an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to this story's future development.
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