awesome! You are the best author I have read so far! keep going!

this is a really good story. your way of writing is brilliant. cant wait for the next chapter.

Wow, I mean, you just describe every thing so well!

You may not like this review as much as ones I've given you in the past... Sam doesn't seem like SAM if you know what I mean. And as a massive fan of both the books and the movies it was a bit of a disppointment. I kept at it because generally your fiction is excellent, but I'd like to see Sam more in character.

I loved all the present chapters you made so far for this story, and I hope you'll make more soon! I just love the descriptions of Frodo's suffering as well as Sam's! It just seems so real... Good luck with this LotR fic!

Ahh! I like the way you write Sam! His hopeful spirit is both inspiring and refreshing. He was always my favorite character! Keep it up! I continue to love this story!

Woah...I dunno whether to scold Frodo or pity him...I'm thinkin' pity...but did he have to push Sam away AGAIN?
*sighs* Poor guys...

As always, MissHaunted-Moonlight, a wonderful chapter...poor Frodo...he just never gets a break does he?!? Maybe...just maybe...one of these days your evil muse will get a non-evil idea and poor Frodo will get a break...but then again, what fun would that be?!? LOL! Keep writing, it's excellent work. Rock on!
-RadcliffePotter

I think this part was even better than the last two, if that's possible. They're all so haunting and beautiful; I tremble to think what the end will be like. "The Land of Shadow" and "Mount Doom" are my 2 favorite chapters in ROTK, and you just paint such vivid pictures of the horror and torment Sam, and especially Frodo, endured. You know, you're the first Frodo writer I've seen that doesn't mention Frodo's, excuse me, Elijah Wood's, blue eyes? Just an observation of mine, it doesn't mean anything in particular. I think you wrote the section where Frodo fights himself over the Ring extremely well, you brought It to life in a way I'd never imagined. Thanks so much for this story!

Another nice part, thanks for the longer Frodo section. I love the line where he says how Sam weeps for everyone, but he cannot. "No, I cannot weep. Not anymore. My eyes have long since wept themselves dry." I find those 3 short lines to be so beautiful and haunting. (sniff) Love the story, please keep it up!

Great to hear about the shorter update time, this story just keeps getting better. Really touching and somewhat bittersweet- in a word, incredible.

But then again, what else can I expect from you?

Aw...not quite the right reaction, huh?
But still, Frodo remembered his Sam!! I'm so happy!

You are doing a good job of showing Sam and Frodo's sufferings.

Keep going MissHaunted-MoonLight, I love it. (By the way, i love how the T's in your pen name are like little crosses...LOL!) The story's so very angsty and wonderful. This is the way it works in *my* mind: "Don't worry Frodo," I cry out to him, "I'll save you!" Frodo swoons, being controlled by the ring, I catch him before he falls and bring him back to his senses...*sigh* now my imagination has run off with me again, where was I?...Ah yes, reviewing your wonderful story! Poor Sam! In a way, it's like he's suffering worse than Frodo because he can't help his Master. Hey...if you ever have some time...you could write a fic about Frodo falling in love with a redheaded hobbit or elf or whatever...say her name was "Luna" or something...*twitches as she hopes you won't realize that the redheaded hobbit/elf is her* Anyway, great fic, keep writing. While I don't write LOTR fic yet, I have written some Enterprise ones, give em a read if you like. Anyway, please continue with the story tithen min. (Yay, Elvish!) Rock on!
-RadcliffePotter

Hey, that's my name at the bottom! COOL! Poor poor little hobbits all alone in Mordor. You write this story very well though! I'll confess I'm a little picky about what I read. I love it! Please update soon!