Man, I am enjoying this so much so far! Not only am I a sucker for Draco does something really good but needs rescuing (preferably by Harry but the Order is still a good alternative), the attraction between Bill and Snape is surprisingly intriguing. You write it well I think, to pull it off. The only thing I regretted was your explanation of Severus's unattractiveness - I kind of liked that about him, it was somehow just a part of his character. But still, this is really awesome so far, and I will eagerly go on to read the rest of the chapters! Hope you update soon :)

please update son!

This is an amazing story. It's well written, sweet, emotional, and dark in all the right places. It reaffirms my hate for Voldemort, makes me look at Bill in a new light (never really thought about him much before), and I just want to hug both Snape and Draco -- Snape for being so naive and oblivious, and Draco just because I want him out of danger. I can't wait for the next chapter -- the chapter I've been waiting for. Maybe not HarryxDraco action just yet, but maybe a little interaction. XDD

I really love this story - lots of draco torture muwhahaha...ahem, I think there might be something mentally wrong with me, but oh well. Anyway I'm absolutely terrible at giving reviews, I just never know what to say - but I just wanted you to know that I hope you update this real soon - I'll be waiting lol.

I really like this story!! Keep up the good work; anxiously waiting for next cap!

this story is amazing badass. I love it! Can't even tell you! And now things can go so many different directions, keep the good stuff coming.

yay! an update! I love the bill/snape bit! It's so sweet! The idea of Snape being beautiful... *Snorts* And the last bit is really kinda creepy... please update soon! =D

i am so glad that you updated!! I really love the love that exists between Draco and Severus, it's really refreshing. Also, I hope there is someway that the Order and Sev get to see Draco standing up to Voldemort during the torture, especially telling him that he pities him! It really reflects Draco's bravery and inner strength that I believe will change some of the Order's opinions about him. Can't wait to read more!

Okay you have no idea how much I love this story.Not only is the plot amasing but you have also made me fall in love with a new pairing as well.I absolutely adore the Bill/Snape and how you play with the idea of snape being really beautiful.It's such a shame though that Bill/Snape is pretty none existant in the archives.So I really can't wait for the next chappie.I only hope we see as much of Bill/Snape as we do Harry/Draco.But I really do love this story and that's rare considering how picky I am.But no critisisms on my part only praise.Happy Writing!

Love love love this chapter. Grins. as you can see I'm back from Scarborough, slightly burnt but raring to get caught up with my stories. Lol I sat and reread this even though I already have. It's that good, you always sell your work short. Don't cos its fab!

this is the best story I HAVE EVER READ!, PLEASE WRITE MORE

I have to admit that I forgot about this story since it had been awhile since the last update but I was so happy when I opened up my email and saw that you had posted a new chapter. Yay! They finally recused Draco and Bill got a look at the REAL Severus! And I can't wait to see what kind of Draco has and if the voldermort was right that he could be the very thing to end the war. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

omg yes!
ahahha I was re-reading through this
and I hoped against hope that somehow, I hadn't reviewed this chapter
because of this line:
Severus made sure his robes were billowing behind him
I KNEW IT!! I knew he did that on purpose!

Snape rocks.

well
this is a war
a sick, twisted, odd, war. So... I didn't really expect the rescue to go smoothly and for everything to be fine.
However, it still sucks that wasn't the case. hahaha
I love Draco to bits! he is so fab, even when he isn't in the forefront.
homg and Bill! ahhaha While I don't like the pairing of bill and severus, I have to say their interactions have been more than comical relief!

I'm sorry your computer crashed! I've been through that torturous hell before. it is not fun.
forget this story? ARE YOU CRAZY!?!?!? ahahhaha theres no way thats going to happen.
This review is quite long, but whatever. ahha I'm curious as to what Draco has that could win Voldemort the war. But I dont think that question will be answered soon.

oh my god i love this story! snape is awesome and it is really interesting the way that bill likes him even before he saw snape without his glamour poor snape is probably confused about it which is very entertaining! draco is awesome he is still... well mostly, sane! i hope! please update soon this story is so good!