Well, so far I've gotten four out of five... Though only two were from the actual poem. XD I just guessed Ed and Al, because I figured they'd be the first two on the list. I guessed Black Hayate, though I thought it was Gluttony at first (Hey, the first stanza was about food! Don't blame me if I got the wrong idea!) And Hughes was pretty obvious. :)

Damn Envy for killing Hughes... Hughes was freaking AWESOME.

Missed the Winry one, though I had sort of a feeling.

Five out of six. That one was pretty clearly Ed's POV.

0.o Obvious much? The Armstrongs really do have inflated senses of self-worth, don't they? If you look up "Clueless" in the dictionary, there's a picture of Armstrong next to it...

Got that one. Ed's stubborn as hell sometimes... Honestly, I don't know how Al puts up with him once he gets fixated on something.

...Roy? Thought it was Riza, actually. XD They *do* make epic pairing... Which is another reason I dislike RoyEd. Aside from the whole 'pedophilia' issue.

Al again? Pretty obvious... ^^

THAT one was Riza... Though, about halfway through, it sounded creepily like Hughes. 0.o Weird. NONONO DON'T EVEN GO THERE BRAINBLEACH I NEED SOME AAGH! -falls over-

So... Ed? Wasn't really sure, but I had a pretty good guess. :)

Well. That one was pretty clear.

Oh god. :/ That one... NEED BRAINBLEACH NOW. -shudder- Freaking rabid goddamn fangirls... Agh. I hate the (original) song too, by the way... Because it's bloody ANNOYING. And there was this one kid in fifth grade... How he thought he could sing, I'll never know. -shudder-

...Al. Obviously Al. :)

Well this was a tough one. X3

WTF I thought it was Gluttony! xD

You know, I was starting to get worried about you. You haven't written in so long!

I like this one, I think, even more than some of your others (though, frankly, I'm not a big fan of Haikus). It kinda really shows that, while it hurts Edward to see Alphonse in the state that he's in... Alphonse hurts that exact same way. Stupid, stubborn Edward just can't see it.

Bad Edward, bad.

Anyway... And just in time for my birthday, too!! Ha ha!!

Jee, I feel old now.
xCxBxBx

PS. I found something that I wrote a while ago. It's really random, but I think that you might like it, so I think that I'm gonna send it to you eventually, along with an explanation of exactly WAY I wrote it. Trust me, it needs it. Cheers!

Lol, you completely forgot to say whose POV this poem was in, even though it's obvious, hehe. It's Al, right? Al's the least depressed of the two brothers, so it has to be. ;) It was certainly good. Boy, can I ever relate to this one, hehe. Even when Ed is being optimistic, he somehow manages to still be depressed. Go figure. Ed's got a talent for that I guess, heh. I suppose that you could technically say the same thing about Al though, but it's not as glaringly obvious in Al's case.

Anyway, I suppose that I should probably go and get breakfast before whatever brainpower I've got left dies, hehe. So, hope to hear from you soon, take care, and have a nice day!

Melissa

oh thank god, someone else out there can't stand that song...my friend even has a special dance for it...~_+

falls over from laughing at that, btw

XD Yeah, I realized it was barbie girl when it said "I’m an Edo-kun, in an Edo world" I love it!

Aw, it's Ok if you can't update everyday. Lotsa people are like that.

*snickers* That was hilarious!

~Lie-chan

You did once again a great job. It was a bit disturbing, actually. Really creepy. But I think I read a part of it before. I believe it was in an Author Note, or something.
Last time,I had that part playing in my head for days. And now it has somehow made its way in again. grmbl.

I can't remember wether I reviewed for the last chapters or not, but I have this feeling that just keeps haunting me. I think it's called guilt. - ducks behind bed - PLEASE forgive me. I've had you on my alert list all this time and still didn't review. I have no excuse.

Lol, this was quite...disturbing...to say the least, lol. That song has always creeped me out, and now it's even worse with Ed and Al singing their rendition, lol. Crepy, hehe.

Anyway, just figured I'd let you know that I miss ya already, hehe. I know we talked yesterday and all, but you know how one is when they can't have something, they want it all the more. ;) *snickers* You're going to make me go bald from tearing all my hair out with my insanity, girl, hehe. Whoever said absence makes the heart grow fonder wasn't kidding...though I wish they'd mentioned a cure for insanity while they were at it...and baldness for that matter...as well as Al-ish exaggeration, hehe.

In any case, I hope to hear from you in some form or another soon. Take care, and have a nice day! *hugs* Love ya little sis...can I call you that? Hehe

See you later,
Melissa

Hey, Addict! You don't mind me calling you that, do you? 'Cause when I say "AA" it makes me think Alcoholic Anonymous.

Oh my God, you actually did it! I seriously thought you were joking or something... ha ha ha...

You make me feel so special and warm and fuzzy inside, so I'm glad that I made you feel the same way - this way, we can be warm and fuzzy together!

(Sorry, that sounded nuts, but I've had three hours sleep and just got home from work... Where I spent seven hours washing walls -.-)

Anyway, when are you going to update something of your own, soon? (ha ha ha!) Can't wait to see what you have brewing!
xCxBxBx

Your poems are like lyrics. ^^

Aw, you had to get online to post this at the one point in the morning when I was not online? Heh, I tend to get up early on Mondays in order to go shopping, lol, so yeah, hehe. That's why I'm on at 12:00 instead of 1:00 or so, hehe. All the same, I am pretty tired, so I'll probably take a short nap, but I'm going to turn up the volume on my speakers and camp out in front of the computer so that I'll know if anyone IMs me, hehe. Yeah, dedicated, I know, hehe, but I miss you guys too much. It's weird waking up in the morning without my Ed being around, lol. Anyway, your Ed says hello...and boy, does he ever miss you, I can tell! LOL! Hope you're surviving at the hands of my crazy spriit guide. ;)

In any case, I hope you're doing well. Take care, and have a nice day! Hope to hear from you soon! :)

Melissa

P.S. Oh yeah, a review is to comment on the material, isn't it? Hehehe...hm...well, the poems were really good. I especially liked that last one you wrote from Ed's POV, forgot what it was called. I don't mean this rhyming one that someone else submitted, I mean the one that YOU wrote, heh. I never thought of submitting a poem to you, but now that that thought's in my head, maybe I should do that, lol. Anyway, see you soon I hope! :)

wow, that was...incredible, once again. the whole story of the elrics is one of the saddest i've ever encountered, and you did an excellent job portraying it. 5/5 stars!

and please update again son!

It was Ed? But who is he describing? Is it during the movie?

And I'd just been thinking about how you haven't updated this in a while...

~C.B.

Wow! I feel so special!! A poem dedicated to me! ME!!

You're so cool. That was really good, too... So... Angst-y and emotion-ful.

You can have the poem, if you want, post it up as your own and everything 'cause (frankly) I'll probably never do anything with it.

... I feel so very special...
xCxBxBx

PS. Is your new boyfriend cool?