wow, that was really good :D I had to go back and read it again to know that I didn't miss anything else FAN-FRIKKEN'-TABULOUS about this story xD

and the only people I can think of you missing are Inuzuka Hana, Inuzuka Tsume and Gaara's student Matsuri.

*thinks very carefully* I don't think you put Matsuri in there. Could you also put Nii Yugito in? She's my favorite jinjuriki (or however you spell it).

Ah, I think you got everyone. Good job.

what about that one girl that becomes Gaaras only student? i cant remember her name.. but temari got a bunch .. kankuro got a bunch and gaara had the one girl.. who later got kidnapped... and saved.. and in shippuden is seen again when gaara is returned to the sand village after chiyos death..

This is pretty much awesome. The one I was sorta hoping for was the female ANBU we saw grieving Hayate at the memorial stone during the Sand/Sound invasion. Her name is Uzuki Yuugao

Great job,
Makes me wish kishi did more with the women in his story, Shizune part seem so real, Ino and Hanabi seem the least damage, hope to see more.

Well. This was a pleasant change. It's nice to see most kunoichi highlighted even though it may only be a snippet of what they are probably thinking.

I can't think for the life of me if you've missed anyone, but with the amount highlighted here, who really cares? You portrayed them all wonderfully.

Good job.

xo
Masked

I love, love, love Hinata's. Kurenai, Temari and Anko are my next favorites. Great job!

I love Mikoto's, Shizune's, Kurenai's, Ino's, and Tenten's the most. =]] But they were all really awesome. =] Nice work.