interesting, not bad...for a second, I was like, wait, fourty years, that's pretty old to still be a wolf...and then ten seconds later, I remembered that as wolfs, they don't age until they stop wolfing out for good...heh...anyway...yeah...thanks for sharing this story
^_^
MONICA

Not bad. Very cute.

HAHA! Poor Edward! Loved it! Sweet but sad

I really enjoyed the one shot!

OMG! this is fantastic! dont make it a one shot, please! you should definitely continue it, i think you may be able to make a story out of it.

I love theh ending, but Edward has quite the temper!

AW! SO ADORIBLE! cannot wait till 4th book comes out in sep 2008! isnt faqndom great? heh, this was quite good! awsome job!

i like this story u should continue with it i am very interested

THAT WAS SEXY!

AGHH

MY DEAR EDIE.
ILY!

xD.

it was gweat.


OMIICARLISLEJASPERNESS

It was nice, but I don't think Edward would have reacted that way. I think he would have known already anyway.