The last paragraph and the last line was just breath-taking. I love this. You describe Pansy's emotions so very well. God, how awful to watch the love of your life getting married to someone else... Gosh. Poor Pans :( Great job with this.

Sad... That's a tragic look at what Draco could have resorted to... And how he makes himself, and Pansy, suffer... Nice one-shot.

I like this one. Poor Pansy. I like that someone FINALLY wrote her as someone who has a heart/feelings. Kudos to you because that seems like something hard to do, lol.

The idea was lovely. Because in the end, Draco really doesn't end up with Pansy. Have you checked JKR's website recently? The story would be more accurate if you changed Rebecca Lynette to Asteria Greengrass. That's what JKR posted behind the door. It was a family tree of certain individuals, and Draco was connected to this girl. It depressed me, but what's a girl to do? Write fanfiction, I guess.

I loved it.

There was one minor typo though: "It wouldn’t change a think."

-Prytania

P.S. I'm adding this story to my C2!

i love this. it always did seem weird to me that JKR wouldn't say he married Pansy, because she really was the only female we saw him with, if we could assume they were more than friends. But, I really like your take on it, especially the last line:)

I love the idea of this story!