holy **. i feel like im gonna cry now. this was so good, but i cant believe how you ended it. jesus i think i'll be sick, this is so intense. i really love this story!

I love this story so much. I think I have read it about 20 or 30 times by now. I just keep coming back to it. But I want to know if Axel is alright. You should write an epilogue or a sequel or something! I bet your readers would love to know what happens after Sora stabbed Axel.

NO! AXEL!
Ha me and Roxy have a common future we want XD
Love the story

Lots O' Love
-Azzy

This story is so beautiful. i remember when i first read it, several months ago. i had scrolled across it several times looking for stories but never clicked on it until i saw it in another author's favorites. back then i was bored and pretty much shruged and clicked on it, deciding that if it was bad i'd just backspace. but oh my god. its amazing. i cried at the end. after i read it that first time i downloaded the soundtrack (welcome home is now one of my favorite songs) and then read it again. unfortunatly, that was before i had an account and i never reviewed. its been about...oh, at least half a year now. i just read it while listing to the soundtrack (in order, and i was surprized by how well i was able to time it) and i just had to let you know that i am again blown away. This story is just so sad...but happy, too? i dont really know how to describe it. it just feels real, which is rare for a fanfiction. anyway, amazing job. thank you for such a beautiful story!

what?? omg my brain is just like throwing out these incomprehensible like, NOTHINGNESS and i'm just freaking out. it was so GOOD but i didn't notice the 'horror' genre till i finished it! that was so sad T_T sorry i don't mean to give you a bad review, i really don't, becuase that was crazy awesome, but its just like, whoa totally wasn't expecting that. anyway your writing style gets me yet again ;) i love it

I hated that ending... but loved it at the same time. Stories don't usually make me cry, but that was just heartbreaking. The way you wrote out the characters made me love this pair more than ever, so it was sad to read the ending.

Beautiful. probably the most well-written fic I have ever found. Amazing.

I'm crying. I think that says enough.

oh dear, i -god- i knew from the 'horror' in genre that this would be creepy but, omg omg, you wrote so beautifully and oh oh god sora, sora is the pervert, how could he -axel, roxas- do this.

(having read minimum of two by tim winton, is not helping)

would it be ok if you explained the whole fic to me? i felt it was pretty ambiguous at times (which could of course be attributed to that fact that i like over-complicating things and my brain is too slow to catch on, and hey i'm dumb like that) and well, the ending has pretty much given me a heart attack and set me off hyperventilating (jks, but still...), so if you could find the time to briefly (or not) explain to me what the ** deal was with all the characters (seriously, you wrote them beautifully, realistically and tragically, if not totally ** in the mind). so please please please help?

LOVED THIS LOTS, thank you for writing.

That hurts me. So bad. My eyes sting. My heart hurts. I feel like crying again. GOD WHY GOD WHY DID LITTLE SORA TURN INTO SUCH A BLOODY PUNK!? Gah, it fits in with the story so DAMN well until I wanna cry. Again.

That was so beautiful. I'm not a fan of first-point-of-view stories but GODDAMNIT that was the most beautiful thing I've ever read.

Congrats to you. I'm your fangirl.

Oh my god. I can't tell you how shocked I was to read that ending. I'm seriously sobbing my face off right now. That's just...too terrible. God, I just...I'm overwhelmed with emotion right now. I don't know if I like this story as of yet. I'm too overwhelmed.

that was horrible i cant believe sora- how depressing
the story was absolutely amazing but the ending... was sad...

Dude...dude that was //DARK// I mean w-o-w...I'm having a bit of trouble getting over the *sick* but this was beautifully written. Great job its dense and gorgeous and stunning, but still...wow...

DX i am crying...WHY DID YOU MAKE ME CRY?!?!
that was so beautiful, yet so sad D
IM GONNA GO KILL SORA NOW.
poor axel! DX
why? WHY?!?
...the tears are still pouring down my face...

ITS NOT PEDOPHELIA! (dun know if i spelled that right lol)
and in the game roxas looks/probably is around 15, right? 15 or 16. or 14.
but anyway, Axel seems about 20-21.
so that means they would be roughly 5 years apart.^_^
it works out~

Dear sweet Jesus...

The story is amazing. Well thought out. Tragic. It has a good plot. But what strikes me the most is the way you put together words to make the reader feel what the characters are feeling. I must say, it's one of the most well written stories I've ever read, and I love you for that. At the same time, I hate you for making it end that way.

Uuwah! No passionate love making! Poor Roxy! Dear Lord, I can hardly think straight enough to write a proper review. I'm afraid this is all you're gonna get. *sob* Wonderful...