You've been watching youtube . . . .

omg!! either I am really emotional today, or you are makin me cry in every story i read lol. I love it. It's so sweet. There's a YouTube video about this song. Olivia Dies in it too. It's done so well...I cry EVERYTIME i watch it. You should watch it too.

Aws. Omg that was so depressing and I can't believe that you killed off Olivia. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?

Wow, that was pretty good. And it was very sad. The song fit perfect with the idea you had. But I do think you should get a beta to edit your work before you post it. I saw a few errors and ou were missing alot of puncuation. Other then that, good job. :)

You captured Elliot's emotions very well. Also, you depicted Cragen's dueling personal and professional feelings accurately.
And the song is appropriate. Nice job.

oh my gosh, it was cheesy but i had tears in my eyes at the end, aint i pathetic?

anyway good job i really liked it! ^_^

This Story made me cry I hope you are happy:[ this is the most sadest story I have ever read espcially an E/O fic!♥♥

Good but sad story!!