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excessivelyperky
2009-10-12 . chapter 15
Yay! Nice final chapter, glad everyone is happy now.
matrice
2009-09-10 . chapter 15
A really, really good fiction. The comparison between Lily-James and Harry-Ginny makes a lot of sense in this perspective.
I liked the change Draco underwent, the way the characters had managed to get past their problems and grow up, thier relationships changing with them. the final message about the improtance of family was very significant.
In the end, I liked how you showed that a person who seemed god to date at the age of fifteen isn't necessarily a good one to marry or have a stable and meaningful relationship with.
You are right in saying that Hermione is a character that would challenge her partner to be better than he is, and that is a great thing for somebody who is willing to change, to mature, to compromise, not so much if one wants a wife that stays at home and cooks and cleans all day.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 15
Totally beautiful!!
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 14
Excellent!! This is really good!!
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 13
Might do Harry some good as well. That kind of love is precious but can be devastating if unrequited.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 12
Oh Severus! Are you both trying to send this young man down the road to hell?? He is redeemable right now! He can't take too many more people betraying him or losing them. Draco is on the edge. If it is his death you seek then just kill him. It would be cleaner and less painful. Don't send him to into taking his own life. Don't make your daughter despise you for your lack of forgiveness.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 11
Wow! Harry, that was so uncool!
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 10
Hermione didn't know how to actually put on a memory charm so it is now permanent? How sad! Didn't everybody give up a lot?
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 9
I still feel for Ron though. He is hurting so badly. Not that Hermione isn't. Not that Ron didn't bring part of it on himself but still he feels something for her. He does love her. I sincerely hope he finds the love of a lifetime though.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 8
She loves him. Always has. Beautiful!
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 7
Tell him who you are marrying. Harry and Draco are so much alike here. Yet Draco no longer even has you.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 6
Sweet! I do like this story. Very realistic! Poor Harry. This is going to be so hard for him. Really for everybody. I'd want to kill that MOB myself after this.
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 5
OMG! Is Harry ever going to forgive these two people?
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 4
Oh my goodness! Everyone died because of that Prophecy and that MOB!
Cassandra30
2009-08-15 . chapter 3
He is totally evil!! That MOB!!
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