In places, this was hard to read. Not because the writing was poor (far from it), but because it hurt. It really, truely hurt.
My favorite bits were the Tatsumi one. His is such a beautiful one-sided affair.

:) Loved the different stages, the progression and changes between the characters and all the little moments you have interweaved between them. 003 was adorable and just... you really have a talent for writing Hisoka.

I very much appreciated this piece. It's refreshing to see different styles. For some reason I like "quiet" writing. To me ideas in this form are subtle. It reminds me of the everyday. Thank you.

beautiful work. I thank you for sharing it.

This style of writing is oddly simple and complex at the same time. Simple in the way that it just is. It's short statements about what just is. Yet complex because you can express what the characters really think and how they act.
A wonderful story. Brilliant, truely.

Fantastic use of the theme. I love your writing and I'm sorry people are giving you a hard time. Did you tell them to kindly f* off? ^_^ 'Cause I would.

Anyway, I'm looking foreward to your next story.