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Shadows-of-Realm
2009-11-21 . chapter 27
Well... I have to say that was an amazing story! The depth and truly uber writing in this story is amazing! I loved it dearly and will treasure it always!

Thanks go to you for brightening my days with your writing!! You are a great writer! PLEASE write us Albus's story, PLEASE!


THANKS AGAIN FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!
BaileeXOXO
2009-11-09 . chapter 11
I made a song for the title of "what dreams may come" it goes like this :

what dreams may come in the future, what dream may come true, what dreams what dreams may come!

Then theres more but if u want to hear the rest find a way to email me. Well anyways great chapter
gummybear1396
2009-10-23 . chapter 27
Loved it! Hope you make a story with them in Hogwarts. Write on!
Ness-Moss
2009-10-11 . chapter 3
i do luv Harry Potter n i dont no how i missed this but what extra bits tht came out l8r r u tokin about? can u plz tell me.
Equinox0320
2009-10-11 . chapter 16
Before I finish this chapter let me guess, Harry is using polyjuice potion to cover up as Lucius. I hope I'm right, it just sort of reminds me of Mad-Eye Moody and Lucius is acting kind of strange.
Equinox0320
2009-10-11 . chapter 15
I recognized your usage of the Roman goddess' name Eileithyia when I first saw it. I think she was what the Romans called a Lares, or a goddess of the household. I was just recently studying Edith Hamilton's "Mythology." That has to be my favorite thing about these kinds of fanfics, the fact that authors derive names and objects from the classical world. I really think that your story is great so far it definitely deserves all the reviews you have been getting. I actually came across this when I was on the site of another popular next generation Harry Potter writer Bartimus Crotchety was his name. There were some things I didn't like about his fanfic some of the dialogue was corny and the climax wasn't explained very well. You are a very talented writer and I don't think I have any complaints. This story has a little bit of everything. And I'm enjoying while I'm in the process of writing my own fanfiction.
David Fishwick
2009-10-09 . chapter 27
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing.
Penelope Richmond
2009-10-06 . chapter 27
Finally finished reading! I LOVED this story as much, or even more than, the others. Ginny is always a pleasure to read about. I loved how you wove such a complex story together so elegantly. It really was beautifully written, in your attention to detail, your creative plot ideas, the grief and the honest struggles of your characters.
Your ideas about death and the afterlife have actually inspired me to continue a (non HP, unfortunately) story that's been sitting dormant in my mind for awhile now. Just one question - I was struck by Dumbledore's use of the phrase "the Infinite" to describe the afterlife; could I possibly use it in my story? I've been looking for the write word for ages, and yours fits so wonderfully.
You're probably getting sick of my rambling reviews and my overuse of adverbs. I'm going to leave off reading your last story until I finish my exams (I've been very naughty reading all your fics while I should be studying) but I can't wait to read it, and I look forward to you returning to the fanfiction world.
Thankyou for your wonderful work!
maybeknot
2009-09-12 . chapter 27
Oh, completely fantastic. I don't normally like Ginny/Harry, but this is really well done.
theSammie
2009-08-17 . chapter 27
I loved this story you are a great writer!
Italian Mutt
2009-08-16 . chapter 2
It was great. Seriously its making me cry a little. Its bringing up good and bad memories, but I like how I can relate.
Italian Mutt
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
This is very interesting. Its amusing, witty and captivating.
Emily31594
2009-08-15 . chapter 4
You capture the character of the visiting people perfectly. They all sound exactly like themselves. Dumbledore, Tonks, Remus, and everyone else.
NerdGurl89
2009-08-11 . chapter 27
Amazing! Your writing skills are brilliant! I can rarely find such writing on ff! I really want to know what you have in store for Albus, so PLEASE write a sequel!
Anna
theSammie
2009-08-05 . chapter 12
There were seven people at Christmas Dinner, Teddy Lupin is seven years old, it was seven years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Lucius Malfoy was arrested for seven years... I don't know what else...
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