great story. o.O How does Rin even know the song? LOL! Loved the ending when Kagome pulled away then sat Inu then kissed sess again. That was funny.

This is an okay idea for a story but you need to know how to write your story in the correct grammer. I don't mind if there is only some mistakes but I think you need to check it more.

kagome should me written with a 'K' example - Kagome

Same thing with 'rin' and the such.

It was interesting...it was short and got to the point...I like those kind of storis. ^_^

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lol i loved the ending!!

Lol that was so funny. Loved the song!

I love it. Respect is one of my favorite songs! And it was incorperated perfectley! Awsome story!

sorry but it was bad... one minute they are singing and the next minute kagome is kissing sesshomaru doesn't he like hate her? u have no real plot or character development.

To tell you the truth it was sorta bad.

There were so many grammer and spelling mistakes.

If you worked on that it would be better