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| JennCorinthos 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseJust found this and I think this was AMAZING! JENNIFER |
| bookworm45 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. That's one way to raise her body temp. |
| shleprock 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abusegood story. my only beef is that i don't think lindsey is as old as you make her in this story! i would not put her past 30. |
| EmpireClover 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Wow, you got the balance between all the genres spot on. I love how Flack reacts to the way Danny is acting. I knew Mac was a romantic at heart! Brill! |
| JuliaB 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat idea! First kiss from a different perspective, haha. The story is wonderful. You brought out the angst and Danny's concern very well. I also liked the perspectives of Flack and Mac on Danny - how they realized that he was acting differently. Really great! |
| Pchefbeth 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story very much. I like how you captured thier characters just right. Nothing over the top, and still business as usual. Nicely done! |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was really good... I am glad she was okay and it was cute how Mac was like let's go get some coffee...he could tell they needed to be together...great job :) |
| OperationMarketGarden 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abusethis was great! i wish you hadn't ended the story there!! |
| katydid13 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome little story! |
| LocoGreggo 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Well done. |
| berta101 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was unbelievably amazing. It has got to be one of the best ones I've read in a VERY long time. I'm totally surprised that something this unique and original made it's way on to this website. I pretty much loved every single word of it! Seriously Great Job, keep up the amazing work! :D |
| TutorGirlml 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseReally really good story! You had me on the edge of my seat when she went through the ice. Great interaction between Danny and Lindsey, I thought you wrote them really well. I also liked the bits of Mac and Flack's thoughts about the way Danny was acting. I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing! |
| neezum 2008-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was excellent. I love how the whole story unfolded, with the cute, light-hearted interaction between the two at the beginning (and sassy/confident Lindsay my favorite!), then how quickly that shifted to be a very dramatic fic. I loved it. Excellent Flack and Mac as well, very well in character. Kudos. |
| SallyJetson 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved the secret interplay between D/L as they were getting her hooked up to belay down to the DB. My stomach was clenching as I tried not to read too quickly through the rescue scene and a sigh of relief when Danny declared he was riding with Lindsay. Nice touch with it being Mac who recognized the significance of the kiss in the end. |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI think this is perfect. |