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| kabwnb 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was super fantastically cute! Perfect little blurb! Great job. |
| crank 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abusewow - great fic. i thought it was really in character. Very very well done. |
| katydid13 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAnother lovely story! |
| Trixy2 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI dig it. You made this believable. |
| MariShal 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, very nice, love it! |
| LocoGreggo 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseLOL. Great story. Cute. |
| mabelreid 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThe part of her that would always stay a country girl. She stole the beats straight out of his heart, rolled her eyes where the menagerie of blondes he usually dated laughed. She smiled at him differently than any girl he’d ever wanted. Like he was missing the crucial evidence, or his fly was down Great lines. You captured both of them so well. Great story. |
| SavvyAngel 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great little fic! :) I *love* this line: "She smiled at him differently than any girl he’d ever wanted. Like he was missing the crucial evidence, or his fly was down. Or that she had just figured out he was full of **." ^_^ |
| wjobsessed 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuse"Didn't have the congested, higrise background to always see what he was thinking, or why he thought it." I love this sentence! A nice metaphor. This is a sweet, little fic of DL. Thanks. |
| mel60 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseGod, I just love the way you write these two. I love this world that you give them. It's amazing. You are brilliant. |
| messersmontana 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuselove it, you caught their character right. |
| ReJo 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I loved this line: "It wasn’t occuring to either of them that it would ever be a poor idea." |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! |
| notesofwimsey 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseHey - weird stuff happening with your disappearing fic - it's pulling a Houdini on me! Anyway - I love the way you deconstruct their relationship here, and end up with it in such solid and comfortable starting place. These two do seem to need to keep starting again from a new footing, don't they? |