Awesome! Your language and writingkills are legendery. If ya did a longer one it would make my daaayyy ;)

This is so good, I admired the suspense.

I don't know what it is about this charming little story but I really like it. I'd love to see you write a long one because your language is descriptive without sounding stupid. If that makes sense. I have a hard time with that. Good luck on future stories!

ahhh...makes me feel so unoriginal for having them actually end up together in my Dramione, but i didn't have the heart to kill their little romance. good job, you had the guts ;P

wow.

Aw...that was so cute...and it leaves us to make up our own minds about the ending *dreams up some fairytale ending* :) Great job!

It's good. The phrasing is rather cliche, but it's still pretty good. :-)

Wow... That was fantastic. Way more worthwhile than homework, no doubt.

Poor Draco. Perhaps Hermione will give him more than a half-turn one day, and they'll live in peaceful harmony...until they get in another fight.

Ah, I should be doing so much work too... At least you're being productive...

Loveleh.

i quite like this, there was lots of description which made it very interesting. It would probably have been better if it was a bit longer though :P still, a very good piece of writing, you have true potential. please R&R my stories ;P

xx

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This is nice. It's short and meaningful. It could sort of be taken as any couple you want. Great first fanfic of the year. Happy New Year by the way.

Gah.

Quite amusing, romantic, and star-crossed.

I love drabbles like these - the ingenius plays on words and ideas, the desperation of those meant-to-be (or not) couples trying to fit and work against all odds.

Perhaps you've told me before, but why is it that it's always Dramione?

I love your stories, you just write them so well...

Lovely imagery! Drabbles are wonderful, aren't they? Kind of like a glimpse into the story, a tease, if you will. And also a marvelous cure for writer's block, I've found. Do continue to write them, won't you? As always, very well done.