that was beautiful (for tragedy is beautiful, no matter how much one does not want it to be.)

Too bad she had to die (and he wasn't even in denial or anything, he wanted to marry her, accepted how much she meant to him.)

...I wonder if he will ever allow himself to be happy, after this. Probably not, but I doubt ten-chan would want that...

...and where was Hinata during the funeral?

wow! that was sad, but adorable! it made me cry, which means it was awesome!!

thats so touching...-sniff- nice story tho...its in my favs,...-sniff-

Beautiful.

Neji Tenten is somehow a pairing that I am afraid to touch. (I only wrote about them once, and that was not even canon. XD)

And the truth that you wrote them like this, painfully beautifula dn haunting made me wipe these trickling tears.

Again, this is beautiful. XD

That was the irony of it all—he could save a regular townsfolk being attacked; he could save a stranger from being robbed—but the one person he wanted to protect, the one person he could stare at endlessly, the one person he would choose to spend his last hours with, the one person who was the world to him, the apple of his eye—that person was the one person he couldn’t save.