That was a phenomenal story. I think that you may become my favorite author so please write more!

Hmm...as much as I liked the last one, I liked the Fugaku and Mikoto one the best. It seemed like a perfect ending.
~Ari

I'm sorta depressed that I'm the only one reviewing this. It's so good!
I liked chapter 10, the general idea of it(is that weird?)
I dunno, I think the idea that he's confused and driven by his need sort of seems real.
And I also like chapter 11. Besides being a natural poet, you found a natural way to end this(if you decided to end this now no one would complain...but don't end this!)
I especially liked 'Even now, after all is said and done and he is lying in a pool of his own blood, all he feels is his beating heart; beating harshly within him as his little brother cried over his slowly fading body.' That touched me in a way. I think this must have been how Sasuke's been feeling his whole life(even in the manga/anime where he doesn't love Itachi). I mean, he must feel some love for the brother that really was the only one who recognized him in a house full of coldness. That love must have been locked beneath the hatred, but I think Sasuke would have felt a huge sense of loss if Itachi had died.
Ari

Sorta depressing, even though it's very good.
I dunno, I feel like Sasuke might be a little ooc, because even though Sasuke is self-centered, I don't think that he was self-pitying. Maybe it's been to long since I've seen the anime/read the manga.
I liked chapter 7, that one made me morbidly happy :D
Good job

Very dark, very nice. Sort of like an elongated haku.
It was very poetic,
Good job.

GASP!
ANGST!

Hey, nice work. It might've had more impact if you had done all of them in the same chapter, just a thought.
So, how's it going?
I'm glad you liked my chapter, the second draft is on it's way soon(all though we all know what soon means)
Ari