So cute!

I love Jo and Laurie!

love, love, love

Congrats, you write very well!

such a sweet story i hope you continue..

SEQUIL! This story is great

Once again you are a great writer, I wish I could write half as good as this! And I do hope you would continue this short but lovely fanfic... but since I'm only the third to review this I'm guessing that is a pipe dream huh? :D

How sweet. I loved this.

This was pretty good! Almost sounded like it could have been a chapter in the book! Technically, you could work a little bit on sentence and paragraph structure. As far as the story itself goes, it was very sweet and entertaining. Keep up the good work!