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| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abuseAwesome. I really like Emily.. |
| Marbs 2008-01-26 ch 12, | abusegreat update. how about the other story? hehehe |
| smokeylove 2008-01-26 ch 12, | abuseonly 1 left? *cries too* but at least we have your other hotch/emily stories!! |
| smokeylove 2008-01-25 ch 11, | abuseYAY! an update! great chapter! |
| tearbos 2008-01-24 ch 11, | abuseAh-too short! Need more! |
| NIC.HEART.MOVIES 2008-01-24 ch 10, | abuseWOW!! this is a very good story!! you are very talented wroter!! in hope you update really really soon!! cant wait for more!! thanks |
| bumblebee917 2008-01-15 ch 10, | abuseThis chapter was really good! I hope they find Emma soon before Leo does anything else sick to her. The girl deserves a break! Keep up the writing! |
| smokeylove 2008-01-15 ch 10, | abuseoh wow! you really have to post the next chapter soon, that was so awesome! |
| tearbos 2008-01-10 ch 8, | abuseoh no. I guess Emma has personal experience with this unsub. This can't be good. |
| tearbos 2008-01-10 ch 5, | abusehe he busted! This message seems bad. |
| tearbos 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOh boy. Intriguing. |
| bumblebee917 2008-01-10 ch 9, | abuseGreat story...very interesting plot. Keep it up! |
| blackpanther2288 2008-01-09 ch 9, | abuseInteresting story! I like Emma, but sometimes she feels a bit Mary Sue-ish. For the first 7 chapters she doesn't sound like someone who'd try to kill herself, maybe just take an accidental overdose, and then it's all very angsty. Also i don't think Hotch would admit his feelings so quickly to anyone, let a lone to a kid he'd just met. And you'll have a lot of explaining to do on how 'Uncle Leo' got into the FBI building. But i do like Hotch/Prentiss moments. Update soon! |
| smokeylove 2008-01-09 ch 9, | abuseoh no, how did he get in? |
| Rubiks 2008-01-06 ch 8, | abuseYou don't have nearly enough reviews for this. Interesting story. I feel poor Emily is rather neglected in the world of fanfic! Update soon :) |