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| Ravencaller 2008-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseI'm on the verge of tears now. Heartbreaking, tragic story. |
| Bad Wolf Spirit 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet and sad. I love it. |
| pinkeop 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseEek. Depressing. I never thought of Mr. Todd realizing that it was Johanna and that's why he let her go. Makes plenty of sense. Loved it! |
| andaere 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow, you wrote this in five minutes? It's perfect. There's not one word in there that seems wrong or out of place. Great job! This was really, heartbreakingly sad. =( And in character. I always did think that Sweeney noticed something about 'the lad's' eyes. Because he could've easily slit 'his' throat, but he doesn't. You know what I mean? And this fic showed perfectly /why/ he doesn't. =) So yeah, amazing job! |
| MahoneSona 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusepoor Johanna! oh it was so beautiful...and so tragic... |
| anbumoo 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuse... ;_; This story made me cry. I think you portrayed Sweeney excellently-- I think that's exactly how he'd react to seeing Johanna. Thank you so much for writing this! Great job!! |
| DreamHolder 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAw... I'm going to cry. Poor Mr. Todd. Great job as always! |
| ForeverACharmedOne 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseVery short maybe, but very powerful! O_O This is great! I love it. |
| SevHar15 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was good! I mean what can I say? That was really GOOD! Good job. |
| Elwyndra 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuse*bawls into tears* *sniffle* This was so sad, too sad! But a very good one-shot! Ohh.. good job! Elwyndra |
| Lady Charity 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAhh! So terribly tragic! I feel so bad for Mr. T. For five minute's work, that's pretty good! Even I couldn't do that so quickly. It takes me...thirty minutes to write my Sweeney fics. Each. Maybe more. I take a lo-o-ong time. Very good story, nice job! |
| Your Undoing 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. I was a little doubtful about the fact that Sweeney didn't just take two seconds to slash Johanna's throat and then go downstairs... this fic makes his hesitation more understandable. Cool! Very well written too, good job! |
| TombstoneGirl 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseomg! so sad! Those three words have broken his heart. She will leave, and he will never hold her in his arms. He will never kiss the top of her head lovingly, will never tuck her into bed. He will never have a daughter. awesome oneshot-i never thought about todd actually realizing that it was johanna! |
| smashing 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAww. Poor Sweeney. If you just take away the whole serial-killer bit he really would make a good family man. |
| niki-chan2 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Watching the movie I was kind of hoping he would somehow recognize Johanna. I was disappointed when he didn't. Great job! |