Oh my.. ^-^ That was amazing. I love your style of writing. It was very detailed and dark but still had a touch of hope to it. I'm definitely going to favorite it. :D I can't wait to read your other stories.

Ok. *deep breath* I commend you for not taking the easy route of simply having Leon vanquish the darkness in himself, drag Cloud and go off into the sunset. You made Leon a realistic person, gritty and riddled with his own doubts even as he tries to cope with them.

The sex is hot, I swear my brain cells short-circuited at that point though I probably would have appreciated in more if I wasn't so apprehensive on your take in the ending. I mean the ending was hopeful and optimistic yes, but it wasn't a coup or anything. Seph isn't really gone as much as darkness is never truly not there.

Um. Yes. I love this. And you too. Possibly.

What a satisfying and excellent conclusion! I like how elaborately you describe the shadows' marks on Leon; they are so vivid and striking. You have beautifully woven the desperation, despair, and hope together into a realistic sort of happy ending.

I like this story a lot. It's so exciting! I really love the details and depth you include, they really flesh out the story. The fighting is phenomenal. The erasure move is killer! Both literally and figuratively. I also really enjoy the way you describe things, it's very visual and engaging. I look forward to reading the rest.

(Have a great day!)

Wow! This story was really god. I was so engrossed in this fic that I stayed up all night to read it begining to end.

atleast cloud wont feel too lonely now :) good story ^^

Nice ending :)

Great chapter.

Aw! Cloud and Leon sharing a bike and riding off together! So cute! It was great the way you changed Leon's appearance as well. His wing is even prettier than before! And the endings great! It's a nice, optimistic one, considering the two that are in it. Another epic battle with Sephiroth awaits them...and probably a whole lot of emotionally-coping shagging until then. ^_^

Another great one!
-DWN

Long time no see! I'm so glad I've come back to so many updates from you. I'll have to read everything over, but it'll be worth it! ^_^

So this chapter was great! There was smexy goodness! I also liked the way you presented the "flashbacks" when they were really what just happened a little before the beginning. And Leon's wing! I was like, "O_O Another wing?! OMG! But what the heck is it gonna look like?" I don't know why I didn't think a white feathered one would've been the most logical choice. Sephiroth's is all fancy and black, and Cloud's is all dark and batty, so Leon is in the middle, white and elegant. I also loved Leon on the bottom! *squee*

-DWN

Wow I really loved this, it was amazing! Awesome work! :D

Great job with this! I really liked it! I only reviewed two chapters ago and now because this story was too good and enthralling to pause long enough to write a review for each chapter!! Once again, LOVED IT!

You write such wonderful fight scenes. I got an adrenaline rush just reading it!

Umm... LEON CAN'T DIE! That, and I LOVE every... single... d4mn... line you have for Sephiroth!! When I read any of his lines, I can actually HEAR him saying them in my head!! Not a lot of fanfic authors can actually capture him as you have. KUDOS TO YOU FOR THAT!! {gives chocolate chip cookies}

I just absolutely love this story! It's so dark yet always portrays the theme of light. I liked the ending, I thought it suited everything very smoothly! The only thing I don't like is that this fic is completed! I really hope you write more stories like this; pure genius!



~Wuv the Playfulness*