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Reviews for: Don't Say I Didn't Warn You
Jokeriswild
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Quite the story, very, very hot! Also I would have never thought up this pairing. I like it though, awesome job!
gschulte
2009-03-24 . chapter 1
i love this. i love this so much. buttercup's character is so believable, and this is such an unpredictable pairing.
definitely favoriting this.
YaoiHellian
2008-11-05 . chapter 1
wow that was awesome hun X3 nice work lmao
Techgirl10
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Oh my...
Hileah rocks x
2008-05-27 . chapter 1
wow
i like these stories u write!
bloody fantasic XD

l saw Sedusa's 'disguise' pretty much quickly lol
but wow, i thought i would neva say this, but this was GREAT :D

love 'Villan' :D
ur stories ROCKS :D
keep up the great work :D
peace x
Negalmuur Oneiros
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Good god, this is awesome. It's cool that Sedusa knows how to "legitimately" manipulate her victims (no, slash that, lovers xD)

And I wonder who is little Simon's father? I'm guessing it might be Ace.
skyblueangel
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
this was so cute and i love ur vids
number 7
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
that was so sick and wrong wat wr u thinkin ah
Steven 'Janus' Apollo
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
I wasn't sure this pairing could be done seriously, but you've proved me wrong. This was amazingly done as usual, and your characterizations of the characters were spot-on. I really felt for Buttercup, and even though I guessed the ending as soon as the woman gave her name, I still managed to feel the same sort of surprise that Cuppo must have felt at discovering her lover's true identity. Needless to say, this is going on my favorites list.

-Slim
Dracori
2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Wow. That was awesome! I'm not big on the idea of SedusaxButtercup, but you know me, I'm pretty much open for any pairing that isn't RRB/PPG 8D

I felt so bad for Buttercup in the end, but at the same time, I knew she wouldn't deny Sedusa, despite the fact that she had used her.

Awesome work! Definitely going to my faves!

~Dracori
CazBM
2008-01-01 . chapter 1
do you know how much i loveyour slash fics? :D this one goes to my faves NOW
you worked buttercup's feeling too good-ly, even when she washurt she was somewhat though ("it hurt so ** bad") and the ending was good too :) poor powerpuff had no ither choice - you made it clear but you also made it misterious-ish.
congrats agan ;]
Commander
2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Wonderfully done! A strange pairing, albiet, but you've really made it work well here. :) And I love the ending--so tained with betrayal. Poor Buttercup.

Again, great job!
Sky-Pirate-Tat
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
When I first saw the summary I raised a brow at the pairing, not finding it very attractive but since it was original and girlxgirl I gave it a shot.

I'm glad I did because this was awesome. I especially loved the ending.

I also liked that you kept the PPG touch of using pun names. XD "Mrs. Mary D’Faux"
AleMent
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Oh.my.god. that was so awesome! love the way you wrote Buttercup, I loved the ending its not exactly what you would expect!
DanielAC
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Omg as soon as I saw "Buttercup & Sedusa" in the character listing I got all excited. xD This pairing is so hot. D: Ahem.

This was a really good fic. I love the concept and you handled it really well. It makes sense that Sedusa's powers would work on lesbians too and we all know Buttercup is totally gay *cough*. I didn't see that ending coming either. For some reason I kinda expected it to have a happier ending... but I dunno why I thought that, considering what you usually write. ^^;; The only thing I saw wrong with it was that you used "they're" when it should have been "their" twice... I'm sure you know the difference and just made a careless mistake, so in the future you should try to look out for things like that. OH. And "Just forget you didn’t see anything," should probably say "forget you saw anything" or something along those lines. And I kinda wish it was longer... but that's not a flaw. I just wanna read more. D8
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