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| LocoGreggo 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet. Poor Danny. Great job. |
| mabelreid 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWell Danny didn't want to cry in front of Lindsay, but that didn't stop me from tearing up at the end. “Just put one foot in front of the other until you walk out of the darkness. It will happen.” One of the best lines I've read in fan fiction. Thanks for staying true to the characters and for giving Lindsay a chance to do for him what he's always done for her. I only wish we could see something like this on the show. |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAww...that was great... I really wish they woulda showed something like this... wonderful job :) |
| A.Boleyn 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! for writing a post-411 fic! Your fics make my day (I read First Fight almost daily) and this brought some much needed DL into the storyline. I think what you achieved so perfectly here is the way in which Lindsay reacted the Danny's tragedy - serenity, strength, and wisdom. The image of her just instantly taking over and taking care of him is not only heart warming but accurate to the characters. I thought I was the only one who didn't expect a display of histrionics between them in this episode. Your story shows how Danny and Lindsay grow closer during tough times. "“Just put one foot in front of the other until you walk out of the darkness. " Beautiful, beautiful line. You know I am a big fan but I will say it again - you rock! |
| Brinchen86 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was just perfect! Great, great work! Happy New Year! |
| SallyJetson 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like the premise of Danny although having regrets about crying in front of Mac, but definitely not wanting to cry in front of Lindsay. The reversal of roles with Lindsay being the supportive one indicates a strong relationship that will persevere. |
| nikki.02 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAww...this was just the ending for that episode I was looking for! |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I love it. |
| serenity2bliss 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseWhat i love most about this fic is how you manage to mantain the charactersitic of the characters. It makes the story comes alive, and not to mention how we wish we could have this scene on the episode! lol! And you have no idea how appreacite that you mention LIndsay's laughing moment with Flack, and that she may look chippy on the outside, but on the inside, she was worried about Danny, though she didn't quite show it. I know that some people find that uncharacteristic for someone who is in a relationship, but i think Lindsay did the right thing by focusing on her job,instead of looking miserable the rest of the day worrying about Danny. |
| Michaela Martin 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing! There have been a lot of these come out and there have only been a few that I thought captured what was going on between them accurately. Tears were stinging my eyes at the last few sentences. Michaela Martin |
| scoob2222 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abusegreat post ep |