Hello,

I found your writing to be very interesting. I really enjoyed the first part, your discription of the scenes you wanted to create were very well written.

Although when it came to the dialogue you did recieve a few chuckles. There seemed to be no build up to the characters attraction/ chemistry to one another. The kiss seems almost awkward, almost expected from both characters. It was slightly confusing to follow.

I love hot chocolate though!

AED

Cute! Mistletoe is an amazing thing, isn't it? Finds the truth! Maybe not, but it sure makes a good story!

I almost choked on my squeal of delight, GREAT JOB!!

Aww... Carth is so sly.
Very cute.
Thanks for writing!!

grinning like the cat that just got the cream! This was so cute!

Nela

This is cute :) I don't really know the characters cuz I dont play that game :( I REALLY WANT TO THO..it looks fun ahah. But this is very good writing!! I like it! Aimee is totally pro :P