Reviews for Hide–And–Seek

Reviews For: Hide–And–Seek

loverofteddy 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseLuv the story! update soon!
Trekkie6 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuse{"I... no. I don't know where he is..."} A surprising feat in and of itself isn’t it? {What the hell kinda mess have the Bobbsey Twins gotten into this time?} HA! No you didn’t! {Perry couldn't keep silent any longer.} Hmm. narrows eyes Is Jason in Perry’s office? {Kent, who somehow was hanging about in the hallway at that exact moment, overheard the conversation and piped up that he would pick up Jason and keep an eye on him.} smile {Really, was he an editor or a babysitter?} LMBO Oh Perry… {"So, in other words," Perry stated, piercing each of them in turn with a flat stare, "he could be hiding anywhere on all sixty-five floors of this building."} That’s a lot of area space…He might as well be loose in Metropolis. Lessons learned, gentlemen. {"All of you have twenty minutes to help find him and then get your articles turned in on time!" A low murmuring spread across the room.} No fair! {"You'll do it because I asked you…Or you can all explain what happened to Lois Lane."} Point taken. I almost got up myself… {Only the child of Lois Lane could get the Planet into this sort of mess.} hehe {The hallway was completely empty, with not even a box to hide behind. However, the door to the archive room stood slightly ajar…} lol What’s he doing? Looking up pictures of Superman? {Her brows knitted together in a puzzled frown. “I don’t think so…”} Then who giggled? {That kid might be able to get one over on Abbott and Costello,} heh {Roscoe tapped a couple of buttons on the touch screen, and then turned toward him. “What did you say, Perry?”} LOL That really makes no sense. Why make it harder for yourself to hear? {Suddenly, from behind them a shout of “Gotcha!” followed by squealing laughter made them turn. Clark held the giggling boy awkwardly in his arms. Jimmy scrambled out of the stairwell behind them, calling out “There you are!”} YAY! They found him! But what are Clark and Jimmy doing down here? curiously narrows eyes at them {Jason’s giggling smile quickly fell, and he opened his mouth to speak, then stopped, looking at Clark, of all people.} hehe {“There’s a lot of heavy equipment and a lot of old machinery in storage down here… which makes it really difficult to see you if you get into trouble.”} Emphasis on the ‘see’. {He’d never seen that look on his mother’s face, not even after the most disastrous events. He must take more strongly after his father in this regard.} lol Well his father does apologize a lot… {“It’s like you can hide in the shadows, kid – you sure you don’t have superpowers or something…?”} I’m glad I’m not eating right this second… {“Don’t be silly, Uncle Perry, I’m not Batman!”} ROFLMBO
Anarra 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abusefunny, very good, and well written
mamaXunicorn 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abusehahaha. "I'm not batman" very nice.
chezE122091 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abuseSO CUTE!! I luv the end =D
Chuthulupenguin 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThat's a great one-liner at the end, perfectly set up. And I like the mention of Clark's super-expressive face, it reminded me of that look from the scene in Perry's office in the movie, you know the one..."I've DONE Superman." Love it, very cute.
Aria Saralyn 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseHaha that was GREAT! "I'm not Batman" . . . poor Clark! Overshadowed by someone else . . . in the eyes of his son!
Rathalyn Starwind 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseGood save. At least no questioned how that kid moves so fast. That blonde intern wouldn't be the (recently announced) comics version of Chloe, now would it?
Shado Librarian 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuse'I'm not Batman!' what a save. [VBG]
CamFan4Ever 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseFalls over giggling Oh loved this! Can so picture that. Hmm... was the young blonde intern a native of Smallville and has a WOW in her old office?

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