wow, its VERY rare that incest works, and you made it work brilliantly. This story was amazing.

GaaTema, am I right? I love GaTema and this fic was so...sexy and sick and I loved it SO much that I read it three or four times!

I'm suprised no one has reviewed this. I think it's very interesting. I must admit, I'm not an incest person but this story intrigued me, nonetheless. I lover the way the title is only losely related to the story, and I like how caring Temari is. The concept of being a paycheck is cool as well.
Sorry, I'm not very good at reviewing. I'm trying to motivate you ^-^ Well, good work. Your description is really well done! 5/5