Very touching, you're right to feel proud.

I like the mingle of music and storyline though, where did you get the idea from? i've seen it used before, but i'm getting mixed thoughts as to whether they were as effective as this or not.

I think that the question i want answering is;

"were you listening to the song as you wrote or did you just CHOOSE the song based on it's lyrics?"

Idle curiosity, but let me know.

I'd like to see this sytle used again, its effective, anything else occurs when i do a re-read, i'll leave a message.

Okay, Take care.