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| Digitalis02 2008-03-25 ch 6,  | abuseHow have I missed this? At first, I was hesitant 'cause I can't take angst unless there's a happy ending and there was! So I'm happy I read it and I really enjoyed it! I especially liked that you involved Danny's mother, I adore stories that involve their families. And I like that you left it with not everything resolved, it makes things more realistic. So thanks for the story! |
| Brinchen86 2008-01-15 ch 6, | abuseI really liked the story, it was great! Thanks for posting it! |
| marialisa 2008-01-15 ch 6, | abuseNice loose ending. Gives you some options for the future should the muse decide to take you in that direction! Love that Flack was prepared to point out to Lindsay that she played a part in all of this too. Nice story - looking forward to your next outing :) |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseOf course I liked it! Very cute... loved the whole broken mug thing...nicely done... I am glad they are going to work it out :) Can't wait to see what happens next so post more soon! |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abusem i understand how it is to have to finish a story off but in the future if you want you can always add more, i wont be one to complain. but hurrah for them cause they're getting back on track to how things should be great story love abblover |
| SallyJetson 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseAh Flack giving Lindsay her share of the business. There are ALWAYS two sides to the story regardless. It only gets healthier when both sides come to the middle. A great tie up, nice and loose with possibilities because that's the way life is. |
| laurzz 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseaww. i thought it was a great ending. realistic.. Plus, you've left it open, just in case you did decide to go back to it. You did a really great job here. Bravo! :) xx |
| Brinchen86 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseI so love this story, it's really, really great! |
| marialisa 2008-01-07 ch 5, | abuseOh, they made up *happy smile* Like how you had Danny realising that his parents marriage wasn't a good role model for his relationship with Lindsay. Looking forward to reading more. |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuseyipee! they made up great work i loved it cant wait 4 more love abbylover |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuseAww...that was really sweet.. I am glad they are talking it out... I can't wait to see what happens next...please post more as soon as you can...when I got the alert that you had posted another chapter I was so excited...had to read it!! Great job :) |
| SallyJetson 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuseFunny how one's history can really affect one's future. I like Danny's realization that his relationhip with Lindsay cannot be modeled after his parent's relationship. I love that Lindsay is sticking up for her own self-worth. She won't take less from Danny than what she think she's worth. We'll see if he can really do it. |
| ncisabbylover 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abusei was a bit reluctant to read this but now im really happy i did so good please update again soon love abbylover |
| MariShal 2008-01-04 ch 4, | abuseInteresting story. Love DL. I hope Danny suffers MORE before Lindsay takes him back :-) |
| biancapj 2008-01-03 ch 4, | abuseHmm. What an interesting turn of events. I can't wait to see what happens next now. |