I love it!

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I like it!

meow, update

This looks extremly interesting and I'll read on but uh, you had a minor error at the top, you said, He had heard the trio talking about it earlier, and had taken his chance to try to help them, about Neville killing the snake. But that's not why, Harry asked him too. Otherwise great story!

Wonderful chapter!! I loved it so much. Keep up the brilliant work, and please try to update again soon. I can't wait to see what will happen next.

AHRG!

Ok. I have so much to comment on this story. I love hermione/lupin time travel fics. And your idea was wonderful, the plot was non-original, but you pulled it off nicely regardless, you made a nice transition between hermione leaving the past/going to the future again, loved when she was pregnant (for 17 years) and such. The only mistakes grammatically that I saw were some pronoun mistakes... But...

NO NO NO NO! Ugh. You NEVER continue a story with the child of the previous main characters! That just shows that you have no plot whatsoever left. The story should have been ended rather than continue on with some OC. If I were you, I would seriously REMOVE this last chapter and either continue with hermione/lupin or just END it. It's very VERY uninteresting. I just told a couple of my friends to read this fic, and had to tell them not to after I finished this last chapter. PLEASE don't continue it like this. It's only going to end in disaster and uninterested readers. If you ever continue with the original characters, I will finish this fic, GLADLY.

Sorry for the criticism, but it's constructiveness as well. Good luck regardless. :)

-Eternal

I was wondering about the whole snape/petunia thing b/c i'd just read we're having a baby and thought there's a little s/p going on and then it pop's up in this story. Kinda strange at first and more so b/c I couldn't really remember much that had happened in previous chapters. Oh well this chapter was awesome and i hope you update soon,

This fic is great! ^^ I certnly raised an eyebrow at the 'Snape getting married to Petunia' thing...I thought it was strange, yet, surprisinly, it seemed to fit somehow...heh. ;D Will it be continued? Or is this the end? Plz keep up the great writing, kay? Ja ne! =^^=

well yes sev and petunia pairing was really random... something i m nt sure i really like... but its alright
but there were loads of mistakes especially your narration turning in first person... take care of that... its confusing
otherwise a good going

I loved it! I really like how you portrayed Snape; I think that's what he's like deep, deep, deep down inside. :)