Wow,that was an intersting way to start thing out!Nice job and I can't wait for the next cahp!^_^

I feel like reviewing after all. Actually I am terribly tired of "angst" nowadays, since you know even the most perilous events or merely the boring every day life can be viewed with humour, hope and phantasy...

On the other side you write very well, the descriptions are vivid and palpable. The story flows in appropriate manner. And here and there you sense little twists with pretence of originality. Thus making this fiction of yours at least and truly a reading pleasure. And often I feel more is not there to claim anyway, but the dance of words and letters.

I shall look forward your next installment. And your ambition to twist the plot in a way ItaSasu to become the option, nonetheless.

With regards.