cute interesting...!

i squealed out loud when i read the will you marry me part you are so awesome great writer you truly ar a great writer

that is the best!!

sasuke blushing now that is unexpected

so sweet, it reminds me of this video i saw on youtube about kakashi leaving and they were trying to find him, just like this story. but i never finished watching it.

Aw! That is so adorable. Sasuke and Kaka are a bit OOC though... Ah well, is amazing. You did get bits of grammer wrong, but I've seen much worse.
4/5

LixxyChan

sequel?

really good story i enjoyed it alot good work

*Sigh* This was wonderful.

Aw...such a sweet ending! I love the princess dress and the end note of "Daisuki." That was a lovely touch. Great job! ^_^

please continue^_^

Nice ending. I'm looking forward to what those answers might be. ^_^

He loves her too! Yay!

But what is really going on?

Keep writing!

did kakashi dye his hair or something? Raven is a dark black...

i really like it you've put your feelings in it so the result was magnificent!!

ahh the suspense. im glad she finally found him and i cant wait to see what happens next