So Garza's mom is still alive. I thought both of his parents died. Looking at your comment on RB - the hospital isn't a normal one - I am guessing it is some sort of prision, but I can't be 100% sure.

Before I comment on more of the story, I really liked the graphics you put up on RB. They have added to the story for me as I now have a better image of what the charecters look like.

If any "evil" (I consider Addie and Bishop to be evil as of now) rangers to join the team, I would have thought that it would have been Addie and (but not or) Bishop. Though I must say, I am a fan of Evan being on Hartford's team. After that episode where you learn about his past (when he was with the cops), I had a feeling that he wasn't a real bad guy. He meshes well with Chris and cares for his friends more than anything else. If there is a sequel (which I am hoping for) and Evan doesn't die, I would like to see him on Hartford's team.

Spencer is the lunati man. I should have guessed when he played such a big role because it sems like no one is innsignificant in this story. Will he help out in the final battle using the Lunati Sword? I wonder, but I know that he has to play some sort of significant role. Obviously it wasn't a coincedence that he grew up an oprhan.

I must say that I was rooting for Chris and Jessican to get toghether when the story started, and I still have a slim hope that it will happen. She is smart an uses her brain, he jumps right into situations - they obviously make a great couple.

Thanks for the great read and I can't wait to find out what is going to happen in the finale! Best of luck!

that was very good. if you would like i have a suggestion. you should use all of the power rangers.

Wow. Now I am even more confused about who the real good guy is in this story. I still feel like it is Chris, Ian, and Jessica but now I feel like Evan may not be a bad guy after all: I suspect that he is working for someone who is trying to take down Dark Shadow, which may have been started by Yan. I'm interested to find out how is tied in/why he is interested in the Lunati treasure. Thanks for another good chapter!

Hey DNick. Its been a while.

This may be one of the best fanfics I have ever read, not to mention one of the top Ranger fics I have ever read. Seriously, if this was a real series it would be so much better than most/any other seasons.

The charecter depth is amazing, the plot is solid with a good deal of twists, and the action scenes have great detail. I keep on wondering if Ian Hartford is really a good guy (I'm sure that Chris is), and if Addie and Bishop are really bad (I think they are good people, but their struggles have conquered them).

I like how there are "3" evil Rangers (it depends if you call Addie and Bishop evil), 2 good Rangers (Chris and Jessica - who seem to be the main protagonists to me) and 1 "I'm only doing it for myself" Ranger (Detective Garza).

You really seem to nail down Spencer and I really like the struggle between Ian and Chris. Personally, I hope they work things out but with all these plot twists I never really know what is going to happen next.

Please continue with the great work!

Hello again!
Another amazing chapter! I was right about my assumptions on Drakar (the way you develop his character is amazing). The storyline for the transforming of the Ja'Vey/Fearcats/Questars was well thought out. I wasnt sure if you were going to show that transformation or not, but it was well done. Ian seems to get more arrogant as the storyline goes on, I am looking forward to seeing where you take that (especially with his bouts with Chris). I see you let Jessica and Graza get together. (^_^). At first I thought it might be the sterotypical red/pink ranger relationship where Chris and Jessica get together. But after the provious chapter where you established them as friends, I turned to Garza. The two characters (Jess and Garza) complement each other well. Again, looking forward to where you will take this.

Lookng forward to the next chapter

Your faithful reader.

P.S. Once again I read the chapter on ranger board. I might open an account there. But for now here I remain!

Hey!
I am so excited that you were able to begin writing again. The chapter was amazing, it may not be what you originally planned, but still GREAT! I have my thoughts about Drakar and Gordan, but we will see where that goes. I actually read the chapter on ranger board, but I will keep responding here. I can't wait for the next chapter (it has Garza!). I hope you will be able to get it up soon.

Your faithful reader

I just wanted to say that this is the best fanfic I have read under power rangers. you took an existing series and revamped it. I look for a new chapter almost evryday. Please keep writing and dont leave this story on hiatus or you will have one crestfallen fan. I look forward to the next chapteer. Again, great fanfic!

Another Great Story D.Nic! This is deinetly a better version of Operation Overdrive!

Much darker, better action, different motivations, and it all ties together realy well.

I am interested to know if Ian is Mac's son or something like that. Spencer is in the story which is why I beleive Ian might be Mac. I hope I find out somethig about that soon.

Thanks for the great read!