That was really good. I like it. Hopefully, the Hyperforce will be able to turn Jinmay back to normal, and defeat Krinkle. I wonder how he escaped.

One small tip.

Paragraphs.

Other than that it’s a good story, keep it up.

it was weird. but very good. you should write a romance story with human jinmay in it.

Good plotline, I can tell you worked on it. My only suggestion would be to separate your paragraphs into a few smaller ones, so it'll be easier to read :). Also, your tense switches from past to present a few times, but that's not important. I love the imagination your put into this, very original. Keep writing!