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wind-master-redmoon
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuseyeah that was a good ending
TragicStoryteller666
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abusei like it
Bloody Dragon
2008-04-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was two CUTE AW Adorable I realy mean it!
Now I have to go find my cookie!! LOL
Yaoi-is-my-best-friend
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abusereally great! i now really want 2 find that song...i really like the words 2 it...keep on writing!
Nayeli
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abusei really liked this! i'm so happy that naruto got his wish and i loved this!:)
Tenshi no Yoko
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abuseDon't mind me, I'm just a little review... xD (Puppy dog eyes)

I whisper in your ear
The words you want to hear
You feel the wind and it reminds you
It happens everytime
You stop and close your eyes
You can't deny what lives inside you
Well I know it's hard to see
What is meant to be
When yesterday is so far behind you
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
The tides take a turn
Another lesson learned
I'm right here but still you wonder
Would you say that you need more
And it's not what it was before
It was before your on your own and going under
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
Whenever you wake up
Whenever you gave up
All that you had for nothing at all
The bed that you lay in
Remember you made it
And nobody's there to catch you when you fall
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
Snowdog367
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusetoo kawaii!
Lightwings
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome, really beautiful.
I like those emotional stories a lot. So keep it up
Angel Light
XxxKiko UchihaXxxx
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseOkay, that literally almost made me cry. It brought tears to my eyes! I loved it so much and it was so sweet!
Let SasuXNaru live on forever! Yay! ^.^
Much love! Yakie Chan!
HelKat
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI would like to say that the story was so sweet I cried, but then I would be lying. I did grin ike an idiot, though. Great work!

^.^
Karichi
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuselol aww thats was so kawaii (though i kept drifting off two my own'story') i accualy kinda almost cried...well not realy but if it got any sadder i might have ^^v
Miah-Chan
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseAw! ^_^ Kawaii! I loved it, it was so adorable. I love Sasu/Naru. You did really well for it being so late and such. Great job! And happy new year!

-- Miah-Chan
Helen Cutie
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseaww, it's soo cute!! XD!! i loved this little oneshot, or I dunno how to call it but itwas beautiful, YOU MADE ME WANNA CRY!! *cries hugging her gaara plushie* *sniffs* I *sob* loved this fic, so cute, and aniki made me cry, *tears* Nyu, I'm so glad they are together, and having 2 kids, and a girl! XD! Aww, I'M AN AUNTIE FINALLEH!! XD! YAY! Pretty good your stoey, and I loved the way it turned out NYUU!! XD! hope kishimoto sensei finds a way of putting them together, if not, he will have yaoi fangirls trying to kill him for months XD! ;D XD! well gtg, ja nee!! *glomp* HAPPY NEW YEEAR!! *throws confetti over you, and a big yellow ball opens and reveals more with those thngies that looks like paper color ribbons XD*
Shakuma-Marie-Uchiha
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuse*cries* So sweet! I love your story :) It's to cute for words. But sad as well...Oh well. SasuNaru PWNs!
i l0VE Y00h iNUYAShA
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseit's really good!!
I started crying,when the flash backs started.
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