 Valmarien 2009-11-28 . chapter 1I love this, as well. All the emotions ring true, and that sense of connection between them both, somehow, in the midst of all this pain, is deeply moving. |
 snakegirl-sprockett 2009-10-11 . chapter 1I like it!
Are you going to write a fic based on it - maybe break canon, he gets discovered and manages to get back to the house, she finds him...etc!
:) |
 the Icelandic sheep 2009-09-16 . chapter 1I adore this piece. It's so heartwarming in a strange way. You made them like each other in a relatively short time without making it seem rushed. Simply beautiful! |
 Iris Belle 2009-09-09 . chapter 1OMGG T__T
i absolutely loved this story, and i love linkin park, too! you're right, that song totally fits. I hope you have a story after these two! we readers HAVE to know what's going to happen after :'( like ... does he live? does she remember? will they be together? ! please think about it :) |
 padslet 2009-01-20 . chapter 1 so has this story been continued? |
 vintena 2008-05-05 . chapter 1Beautiful! I always love a story that fits in with the original one. Well written, as well. |
 gowvan 2008-02-26 . chapter 1 Love your stories. This one is no exception.
Just Lovely. |
 Lady Claire Sev 2008-02-05 . chapter 1 Wonderful story! I loved it! Write more stories - or a continuation - soon! |
 Murgy31 2008-02-05 . chapter 1That was great! |
 FireChildSlytherin5 2008-02-05 . chapter 1Great one-shot. :) |
 Iva1201 2008-02-05 . chapter 1Very nice, though I don't see them using first names. But that's purely my view. (-: |
 Kilara16 2008-01-07 . chapter 1oh my gosh. That was written amazingly!! Would you ever consider adding on to this? It would be awesome if we see Hermione once she remembers everything!! |
 karlii 2008-01-03 . chapter 1In some way, I could tell that this story was written last summer. It felt too raw, too fresh, to be totally written more currently.
I LOVE the thought that Hermione will remember what Snape told her. And that she will be able to discuss it with Harry.
I hope, that somehow, while Harry was able to have Snape remembered, that the lack of portrait in canon, will lead to an alternate ending..
I do like the 'missing scene' concept.. and I hope to that the ideas will flow for you, to write the next scene.
Keep up the good work! |
 tearsofphoenix 2008-01-02 . chapter 1Thank you for a great story, this is a very original way to write a beautiful tale after DH.
And, after the reading of your AN, I've re- read this passage:
"“Yes. I may choose to reverse the spell at any time, and upon my death, if it is still in place, the spell will be broken and your memories will be returned.”"
Now I think that your sequel (that I hope you'll write soon :) could really be EWE if you would, because if the spell had been broken after his death, then Hermione couldn't have reacted as she did in DH... so, or he isn't dead at all, or she will do something different... and at this point the story will be no more canon compliant, and perhaps he will live :) |
 Twistedeveryway69 2008-01-02 . chapter 1That was really good. I hope it wasn't a oneshot. Please write more! |