beautiful

beautiful...

Interesting choice of style, it isn't something one sees much. I like it.

I'm not sure if I've reviewed this yet but if I have then I'll do it again. ^^"
This was beautiful. I loved every word. It was so beautifully written its hard not to fall in love with it. You wrote in the summary "unapoligically dark and twisted" (please forgive my bad spelling ^^') Well I must be pretty dark and twisted myself because i found a few of these pretty funny. The ending was terribly sad but I think it complimented the story well. Excellent job on this story its going up on favorites. :D

Ohh very awesome... woa! This is my favorite pairing OWO and I think this is very cute...I love it and great job

I love this pairing!
The best sentence is...#33^^
But the others are preety good as well^^
XD

wow this is absolutely super special AWESOME! xD it is definately one of the best psychoshipping fics out there! every sentence was fantastic and really gives you an indepth insight into yami no bakura and yami no maliks relationship. everything about this was exceptionally well written, breathtaking and very real. all the things that draw readers in and captivates them with each and every word. everything is right about this, there is no way that this could be any more perfect. i adored every sentence ^^ i don't think i can realy explain very well the way i feel about this piece. the only word i can think of that even come close to explaining it is absolutely fantastic. keep up the really great work! xoxo happy 2008!

...WOW.
That was...just wonderful! Amazingly in-character for one, and also simply extraordinarily well written and emotional. This has got to be THE psychoshipping fic. You know, it's the fic you would show someone unfamiliar with the pairing to exemplify all that is great of this pairing. I adored how each sentence drew the reader in just that little bit more, so that by the end we ALL end up as Bakura does...drawn to the flame and gasping for breath(though hopefully not dead). Truly a superb piece, one of the best psychoshipping fics around!

Those 50 slices were delicious. I ate every last one XD

There is something very fragile and pretty about the picture you paint for them, that their 'love' is something fleeting. Also, you have a way with words that, I don't know. Well. Am speechless, actually. Except... WOW. And it has something painful as well. And I really cannot be any more coherent than that ^^;