Hey, you're totally right! Thank you for making it possible.

I totally agree with you - I was surprised when I found out L'arachel didn't have an ending with Rennac! Their relationship is so intricate and interesting, it was really quite a pity. The writing style fits in nicely with the story, flipping between the past and the present, showing the contrast between the before and after-marriage L'arachel.

Huh, funny how I haven't reviewed this yet. I could've sworn I'd gone on a RennacL'Arachel hunt and read everything. XD

Anyway, this is a VERY interesting take on what could've happened between them. As much as like them together, I DO also like to see stories on how they cope if L'Arachel married someone else (and yes, they SHOULD have gotten an ending together. I don't know what those developpers were thinking). I also like your ending; it's like a cliff-hanger, but we know what he's going to do. It kinda sends a chill down the spine, you know?

The only thing I have to point out is that you do have many spelling mistakes. They're all minor errors, and I'm sure you would've caught them with a careful re-reading. Other than that, great story!

I loved this! It bugs me too, that Rennac and L'Arachel don't have an ending together. I like them together.

Wow.

...Granted, I'm a sucker for Rennac x L'Arachel in nearly any form, but this is really well-executed. Your voice for Rennac is great, but I may have to award more props for making it possible to use the words "Dozla" and "subtle" in the same sentence. Like so: the way in which you used Dozla was surprisingly subtle (wow, now I have to go lie down).

In short: great fic. Afraid I can't say anything much more helpful than that.

Damn right! I love the two together so why the hell can't they get married or at least have an ending together. They are cute together and I loved their second support! Most people just pair L'Arachel with Ephraim but I don't know their conversations are good but they just don't fit!

Thanks for writing this, I was just looking up a RxL fic but I couldn't find one, can you believe it?

Long live Rennac + L'Arachel!

I liked how you showed Dozla and Rennac's feelings. Your story made me sad :( And I agree, the Rennac/L'Arachel pairing needs more love.