FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| FireEdge 2008-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseHuh, funny how I haven't reviewed this yet. I could've sworn I'd gone on a RennacL'Arachel hunt and read everything. XD Anyway, this is a VERY interesting take on what could've happened between them. As much as like them together, I DO also like to see stories on how they cope if L'Arachel married someone else (and yes, they SHOULD have gotten an ending together. I don't know what those developpers were thinking). I also like your ending; it's like a cliff-hanger, but we know what he's going to do. It kinda sends a chill down the spine, you know? The only thing I have to point out is that you do have many spelling mistakes. They're all minor errors, and I'm sure you would've caught them with a careful re-reading. Other than that, great story! |
| fir8008 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! It bugs me too, that Rennac and L'Arachel don't have an ending together. I like them together. |
| Tavreynya 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. ...Granted, I'm a sucker for Rennac x L'Arachel in nearly any form, but this is really well-executed. Your voice for Rennac is great, but I may have to award more props for making it possible to use the words "Dozla" and "subtle" in the same sentence. Like so: the way in which you used Dozla was surprisingly subtle (wow, now I have to go lie down). In short: great fic. Afraid I can't say anything much more helpful than that. |
| MidsummerNiteDreamer 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseDamn right! I love the two together so why the hell can't they get married or at least have an ending together. They are cute together and I loved their second support! Most people just pair L'Arachel with Ephraim but I don't know their conversations are good but they just don't fit! Thanks for writing this, I was just looking up a RxL fic but I couldn't find one, can you believe it? Long live Rennac + L'Arachel! |
| Umbrielle 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you showed Dozla and Rennac's feelings. Your story made me sad :( And I agree, the Rennac/L'Arachel pairing needs more love. |