I love the twist of Mohinder being in control, lying and torturing and using Sylar. He isn't as sweet as he seems at first view. Really awesome, the detached voice and the schedule format work really well ^_^

I don't like Mohinder in this one. How can you make him so cruel? He's so sweet...and poor poor Sylar. I feel so sorry for him...

But I love the story. It's very well written.

My, you made me feel so sorry for Sylar as I`ve never felt before, and feel like hitting Mohinder with a building in his head... but great writing, quite perfect!