omg, a yaoi/yuri fanfiction! This is a firsT! Nice work, I must say...possible sequel?

Well, urhm, I dunno what to say. Kudos, I guess, for writing a yaoi/yuri fanfiction, first off. That takes balls in a mostly het-based fandom. Well, but, I mainly write shounen-ai, so... @_@

I also have to say good job for sticking to good spelling and grammar, which seems to be... awry around here. Although I would have to correct your name spellings -

Karika -> Kirika
Sempi -> Sempai

Personality-wise... Karin's a little more cheery/optimistic than this. Also, she almost always calls Michiru 'Micchi,' not 'Nishikiori-san.' It's Michiru who always uses surname-san all the time. Karin's not so formal.

Er, well, I personally don't think Michiru's personality is dominant but I guess that's just personal interpretation/choice/whatever.

I can't say I thought it was great, but I think that's because of the plot. It just disagreed with my personal preferences. Looking at it more neutrally, I find it a decent enough plot, though. Aa. But good job either way.

Thanks for my gift ^^ It was great! Karin and Kirika are so cute ^^

aww... karin-chan is such a dope ^^` hmm... i wonder what kirika would look like with long hair? -goes and draws exactly that- lol

actually i think it would've been better if she had slightly longer hair but still pretty short. that would look cute too.

anyways, good story. it was really cute ^.^