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| Saavik13 2008-07-07 ch 3,  | abusewonderful story! I'd love to see them meet again when Spock is older and in Star Fleet, or even post-movie |
| civilmary 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseNice story. There needs to be more normal stories like this one for us to read. Characterizations are all good. We need good, standard Trek stories like this for entertainment. Too many Trek stories don't have the feel that the original series gave us -- your does. |
| RedSkyAtDawn 2008-03-04 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! There's just got to be more! Right? |
| Cori Rain 2008-01-27 ch 3, | abuseThis is one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. I wish there was more to the story or maybe even a sequal. If this was a real star trek novel, it would be one of the few books I couldn't put down. Awsome Job! |
| Astraeas Dreams 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseWow, a good piece of work. I liked it very much, especially because it gives an intereting reason why yung Spock was thinking about joining Starfleet. Thank you for writing it. Astraeas Dreams |
| Firewolfe 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseInteresting piece and it gives a vialble reason why Spock might be more inclied to join Star Fleet. Lisa |
| Karen 2008-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood job so far. This is intriguing and a good look at a young Spock. Keep going! The note below says to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved -- I would caution, I suppose, to not let your villain be too typecast. Cural should have *some* motivation that might be construed as sympathetic -- just to keep him interesting. Hurry on Chapter 2! |
| isadax 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Please update soon. |