oups, i just forgot to tell you, with my poor poor english
that "the endless" is one of the best shiznat fiction i ever read
and, my god, i never thought i could read a deep fanphilosophiction there.
-Death and dream- Where did you just find this amazing fucking curious idea?!
and the tale you wrote about the tears drinker and the princess unable of tears?
you have to write scénario for séries
you have to create a new one
bye bye

I come from france and i read your fiction,
it's very deep and really interesting
for sure, you're maybe arrogant, like everybody, but unlike everybody, you dont have illusion about that.
Et cela n'empêche en rien d'avoir du talent.

I'm personnaly monomaniac with shizuru/natsuki fanfiction, (i had a master in psychologie and there are some much to say about being fan with that type of couple:shiznat...)
i dont write anything, so i dont have abonnement or truc like that in .
It's the first tim i wrote a review there.
So, be my first time, you are very interesting.
Non, je n'ai pas vraiment lu Victor Hugo (quelques poème)
But i read proust. Then it's someone who read proust, truman capote, freud, descarte (not spinoza) and japonese manga who write there and who like what you wrote.
I also read shakespeare
this sentence ( about "death" and "feed" and "thou" you put this in right order and you've got the sentence)come from hamlet? king Lear?
you didn't tell
bye

Only through the first chapter, but I like it very much already. Your characters aren't themselves, but yet are, and the whole fic has a nice sepia-toned-reality feel to it.

With this...I think I've favorited almost every one of your stories. *sweatdrops* Maybe I'll go read the last one after I finish this one.

wow. intense awosme story. um do you if you are going to update?

All I can say is...wow...words are failing me at this moment...But I can say that I love your writeing style...its...captivating...so I cant wait for your next update.

Really interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

oh,me, when will you continue on this fiction? I just can't wait until the next chapter becasue this is so ...captivating? this is the first fiction that ahve made me feel this way. you have a very special way of writing fictions, just like your other fic, inter nos. I just can't wait until the next chapter on each one of these. Please, keep on writing.

Read entire collection of NG's Sandman years ago. A masterpiece of graphic novel. So was delighted to find that one of my favourite FF writers is writing a cross between Sandman and our two fav characters from MaiHime. ShizNat as Death & Dream is simply a hit as is Nao as Desire. Totally love your chapters centering on ShizNat esp chp6...thank you. Looking forward to more creative licence for a ShizNat centric story line. Next up Dream's hairpin!

A incredible chapter as usual, really loved every little moment as i read it. I hope to see more about Natsuki's journey to Hell and i wonder will Shizuru follow her? or someone? It might be interesting, hope you dont take too long updating ^^

The love-making was almost poetry, flowing and sensual. And very sublime.
I can't say enough to describe the level of awesomeness that you have been elevated to.

mon cherie, this is the perfect birthday present. Merci. RPX

it's...wow, ethne, you left me speechless. i don't know how best to describe this new chapter. marvelous is an understatement. how come you're getting better and better every chapter?! argh, i hate you. ~_^

anyhow, hehehe, dream and death's relationship seems pretty complicated to me, as well as dream's personality. i'd say she's a fusion of HiME and Otome natsuki. i like that. :) and the smut! oh my goodness! it's more than erotic, more than sensual...i told you words fail me at this moment, but i really, really enjoyed it. what bothered me, though, was desire's presence. so she really does peeps into her sisters's sexy time! oh..that sounds like trouble to me. i hope she doesn't do anything more than peeping. please don't tell me that like in volume one, desire has a hidden (desire) for dream. :)

dream and death's wordplays are just too amusing. what i particularly like, though, was death's inquiry about dream's plans; after death retold the story of "true love", and, of course, death's inquiry about dream's "hunger". hahaha! :):):)

as always, you have a good day, ethne. take care. :)

paix!

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This chapter was incredible. I'm dying for you next update. Soon, I hope.

I love this confrontation between Death and Dream. Can't wait to read what's next!

This story was a little scary due to Rachel's appearance when Natsuki found her. Then a little erotic when Shizuru and her finally sees each other.