that was the most random story i have ever read lol what the heck but still it was hilarious

That was AWESOME it's definitely going to favorites!!Hilarious!

WOW

thats all i gotta say

just, WOW

Um...maybe you should get some more sleep

YOU GUYS SUCK! YOU SHOULD MORE THAN A ** 2 HOURS OF SLEEP! This story is a load of crap...didya know that? A LOAD OF CRAP!! Who ** cares about ** Harry Potter realated crap with ** snape and ** hermione and ** dumbledore and ** ron! Who gives a damn? Who? WHO?? And, good god, if you guys have that much time on your hands to write a suckish story like that you are ** losers and you could have spent that valuable time that you spent writing the damn story on getting some ** sleep. You guys should go to therapy or see a doctor or get your freaking heads fixed or something! ** you idiots! ** harry potter and harry potter realted crap! ** the author of harry potter, ** j.k.rowling!! ** THE WORLD! SCREW EVERYONE I ** HATE THIS STORY!
thnx for listening to what i have to say and if you arent wimps, you wont cry. >=]

I understand you're seriously sleep deprived...but..umm...maybe you should get some more sleep before posting anything more. I usually don't criticize people's works...but this was a bit messed up.

To sum it up in a word: WTF (even though it's technically three)

Hope you get some sleep! XD

Kate... this is your most messed up story yet! what was wrong with you? I can write a better story off of 2 hours of sleep! but then again, you had some help, so i guess you aren't THAT crazy! i promised you i would do this! I keep my promises! but sreiously, Hermione and SNAPE? you could have come up with something better and more origonal than that! oh well, you can always write a new one! yay for having the rest of your life ahead of you to fix this story!!

very interesting story
keep smiling :-)

wtf?

LMFIAO that's good stuff man

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's funny and revealing! Great job guys! lol... :]:] :] :] :] :] :] :]

Hey! I co-wrote this! Its pretty dumb ain't it? But funny...

-Elly*