The words are pretty - it feels kind of like an abstract painting; it looks very attractive but I can't make any sense of it. Aerith dies at the end, okay, I get that. Did you imply that she cut herself earlier? *does not compute* Sorry, it just left me confused.

My, that was lovely and extremely sad. I'm sure Aerith had so much regret during her last moments. It was very heartwrenching, especially when you were expressing her feelings towards him.
'He was such a good,good boy..' Ah, Aerith. Poor little girl.

Lute! This is PH, just so you know.

Although it was confusing at times, I must say that you have a really nice way with words. Very precise to let the reader know how Aerith felt. I love it :]

This is...wonderful! I really really love your portrayal of Aerith, and your acknowledgement that she wasn't the cheerful, glowing heroine everyone always tries to turn her into...really, really well done :)

Lute! This is a beautiful piece! It's not crap at all!! IT's sad, yes, but we all need a bit of angst from time to time. Wonderful writing my dear! I love it!