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Aspen Le Fay
2008-07-24
ch 21,
abusejust read chap 1-21 i think its a good story.
dragonzfire718
2008-07-23
ch 21,
abuseGreat chapters. Hopefully everything with Da gets explained soon. Looking forward to updates.
dragonzfire718
2008-05-24
ch 18,
abuseAlways glad to be of service with reviewing. Thanks for the mention :) I found it interesting the way they all reacted when Trista walked in. I'm really curious on whats going to happen when they get back and what happens on the hit...Keep up the great story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
dragonzfire718
2008-05-21
ch 17,
abuseWOW your updating almost faster than i can read the chapters. It makes me so happy =) I liked this chapter (even though it didn't have the brothers in it) It gave an incite to Trista. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
dragonzfire718
2008-05-21
ch 16,
abuseDa has to lay off of Trista. She's a big girl and can take care of herself! But anyway loved the chapter can't wait for more =)
dragonzfire718
2008-05-18
ch 15,
abuseI love the way you have their accent down pat. How dare Murphy think that way...but then again Da has a point but he is wrong still. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your prom is great.
dragonzfire718
2008-05-18
ch 14,
abuseYay a happy chapter for Trista and Connor! I love the fact that Connor isn't really mad at Trista.
Jade Opal
2008-05-15
ch 13, anon.
abuseO...I like how you have Connor go from being all sulking to just being glad to see Trista. Nicely done, JBE.
dragonzfire718
2008-05-14
ch 13,
abuseI see it already. Da doesn't like Trista. But anyway about that. YAY Connor has his Trista back =) Can't wait for the next chapter.
dragonzfire718
2008-04-17
ch 11,
abuseOh two updates in one day...YAY! Anna needs to get her head out of the clouds. Can't wait to see what is gonna happen in Chicago.
dragonzfire718
2008-04-17
ch 10,
abuseMurphy needs to try to understand Connor a little bit better. I have a nice feeling that Trista will eventually find the brothers if she really puts her mind to it. Please update soon!
IrishSaints
2008-04-16
ch 9,
abuseRAWR.

some angry tension that needs to be released here.

I say a good old, MacManus brotherly fist fight might do the trick.

can't wait for more!

~Nell
dragonzfire718
2008-04-15
ch 9,
abuseOh just oozing power...lmao...Connor really needs to get back to Boston and soon...Good luck with the play I bet it's gonna be a smash! Looking foward to the next chapter =)
dragonzfire718
2008-04-13
ch 8,
abuseI finally got to read How it Falls and Gravity before reading this one and I am just loving this. I love the rollercoaster ride. Please update this story soon I can't wait to find out if Trista and Anna reunite with Connor and Murphy!
IrishSaints
2008-03-02
ch 8,
abusehm...informal interrogation is right...

can't wait for more!!

~Nell
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