I thought all of the chapters were lovely but this one in particular is very well written--it gave the feeling of stepping outside at midnight when snow is falling. Great use of character development. Excellent narration. Thanks for sharing.

I really like this story. I've always been a Henry/Coreen shipper and this story is right up my alley. Great job! IS there going to be more?

You're a goddess. No REALLY. I just finished watching the last episode (E PLS DON'T BE THE LAST EPISODE PLEASE!) and I really needed some fic to take my mind off it. And look, I found cleverly constructed and WELL WRITTEN fic! Hurrah! I think I love you!! Dialogue was great, characterisation fantastic and I love Five Things. So yeah, you kind of rock. I hope you write some Vicki/Henry as well - I totally love that Coreen got attention here, she's a great character, but you know. I find a good writer, I want them on my ship :)