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Jesse Lee
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
Nice.
RedBlueGreen
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
Love this, it's such fun. You can just see Ron and Shego leaning on each other laughing, and Drakken's suggesting she turn to villainy is great (but has a typo: "The Blue scientists looked at her brightly" when there's only one of him.)

Funny Drakken and Shego didn't take the advantage to lock her up, but it's better to the laughs.

Great stuff.
Sonny Day
2008-06-04 . chapter 1
Fantastic, the interactions and slapstick are really good. I love the ending.
Jonshine
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
It's short, and it's sweet. Well written, with a delightfully funny, open-ended ending. Exactly what something of this length should be.
Mr. Wizard
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
What a way to start off the new year! Oh, great, she's thinking...
my gaurdian HaruHara
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
A banana did the unthinkable defeat Kim Possible.

Excuse me while i laugh in this here corner
Drakonis Aurous
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
Hilarious! Kim losing to a fight to a banana peel? A classic slapstick gag and it works so well here. That and Ron and Shego's reaction to th whole matter. I got say though once Kim's gotten over this Ron is in for it. Great work!

- Drakonis Aurous
Drelufon
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
good first shot, hope to see more Fan fics

TTFN
eoraptor
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
fun fun fun is all I have to say
King in Yellow
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Wonderful bit of slapstick. From the key under the mat to Ron's unfortunate reaction once he learned Kim was fine everything was perfect. Once the headache it gone, however, Ron may be in more trouble than Shego.

KiY
Pharaoh Rutin Tutin
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
There have been plenty of Kim-Goes-Bad stories with causes ranging from regret to frustration to the attiudinator to drugs. (where did I read that one?) Why not a banana peel?
creativetoo
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Oh my God...that was so funny.
This gave me a good laugh. :)
Sitchit
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Perfect little short story. I was confused a little on who was speaking sometimes; you often have a line of dialog followed directly by the other person's actions, not the speaker's. Other than that I thought it was well-written and hilarious to say the least! I loved it!
UncleFester84
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Bwahahahaha!
RickQWERTY
2008-01-01 . chapter 1
Funny, very funny! I had to bite my tongue not to laugh (I was at work so it would look suspicious).

In short nice little fic that everyone is sure to enjoy. Good work!
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