Totally awesome but the ending confuses me! No need to worry though I'm pretty stupid!

wow amazing...

That was really powerful to me: Ulquiorra doubting himself, suffering because of himself, and because of her, and the whole theme on "home free"... very well written. And, I must add, I'm glad to see a good writer who can also utilize good grammar as well :).

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I liked it.. but..I would love the last line to be like this :

Ulquiorra proceeds to follow her... he is lost in the light with her (or something like that) No they can be home free together. or something like that anyway ;)

Aw... I like it. i think they make a cute couple, and i get the impression the Ulquiorra likes Inoue anyway from the latest ep anyway... but that might just be me.

your story was beautiful and deep youve inspired me thank you :)

That was so... intense. Beautiful prose. And killer last line :)

That was REALLY deep ... The last three paragraphs really got me... ^^

it was really powerful. great!

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wooah... so deep. very cool!