 marora 2009-06-29 . chapter 1It's like a highschool crush on a guy that your friends don't like so you can't tell him, and you have to scold him. But you like him anyway.
I loved it. |
 DarkestVampire 2008-01-25 . chapter 5As an ispiration, maybe the next chapter is about Seras`s thoughts in the fight against Captain Hans, as she´s "revived" by the undead Pip? |
 Ondjage 2008-01-22 . chapter 5Nicely written. Seras and Pip FTW! |
 Selene08 2008-01-21 . chapter 5Those two sentences brought a virtual tear to my eye *sniff* beautiful! Simply, beautiful. Please continue this! You just have to! Its so wonderful, and so beautiful. I love how their short but oh so sweet! I love these drabbles so much! Please update soon! |
 DarkestVampire 2008-01-05 . chapter 4M, short, but good.
I hope you don`t run out of ideas, because it was great so far.
As short as the chapter is, as short is my comment^^ |
 Selene08 2008-01-04 . chapter 4*girlish sqeual* omg! That was so awesome! Wonderful work! Perfect! Simply brilliant! |
 DarkestVampire 2008-01-04 . chapter 3M, alittle short for a kissing scene... it could discribe her feelings in this moment a bit more.
But other than that, pretty good. |
 Selene08 2008-01-03 . chapter 3Wow! That is so awesome! Please keep updating, I love these drabbles. Much awesomeness! |
 DarkMignonette 2008-01-03 . chapter 2This was cute! I caught a few grammar issues, but nothing major. Other than that it was good, and I hope you update soon! |
 DarkestVampire 2008-01-03 . chapter 2Again, wonderful. Fitting, in caracter, although his speaking accent is a bit overdone...
And one thing.. if Seras likes accents so much, then she should love Anderson. He`s got one hell of an accent in his deep voice.
"Where do ye think yer goin? There`s no place tha run, Ashes tho ashes, Dust tho dust. Amen."
Keep it up, its perfect. |
 Selene08 2008-01-02 . chapter 2AWESOME! Please update soon! I dunno for suggestions, perhaps something having to do with Seras having a dream about Pip or whatever. Anyways, au revoir ma copine! |
 DarkestVampire 2008-01-02 . chapter 1Wonderful. Short, but wonderful and fitting.
Just a little adjustment to the gramma would be nice... after a dot make a new line for the next sentence, and you can read the text much clearer and more easier.
But i can see the way Seras hides the feeling that this word makes her feel better. I think we all can.
Added to my favorites. |
 Selene08 2008-01-01 . chapter 1AW! That was so cute and so sweet, go Pip and Seras! I loved this fanfic so much, keep up the awesome work! |